GREAT PURGE II

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HAHAHAHAHAHA! No but seriously, you have a glowing red guy next to a volcano while there in space.

author=Jericho
beautiful. astounding. a true masterpiece.

I really hope you're joking.
Link_2112
rush rush rush
3605
the more you whine. the more screens you post. the more you insult the staff. the worse you look.
What the hell is wrong with it though? If people actually tell me what's not to like I can fix it.
There's no polite way to say this so I'll have to be an asshole.

The game that you've worked so hard on. That you've spend blood, sweat and tears on... sucks giant flaming donkey balls.

Go home, cry like a little girl for a couple of hours and then get up the next day and try this shit again.
You have a glowing guy next to pyramids and volcanoes on one side. Then you have the invert walking inn space. Along with another random fence.
Liberty
~RTP Princess~
9501
Here's a bit of constructive critique. Firstly, you've got it set inside a volcano. Great location! A lot can be done with that idea - just look at Heros Realm for example. The problem with this map - and there are quite a few of them - would be the bland mapping. There are no details that give the allusion to being inside said volcano. The snow-fence wouldn't be in a volcano, the glass/see-through floors are just odd. Is it supposed to be a lava waterfall? But then the ice and glass makes no sense. The only good thing in this screen shot are the character sets, but they can't be the main selling point of a game. It just doesn't make sense, even with the description you added. Find another way to convey the images in your mind to the player. Even custom stuff would be better than this.

You are the one that chose this shot to represent your game. Is this how the rest of the game looks? If so, I'm not so sure the staff were being mean to you so much as being nice to the rest of us.
Link_2112
rush rush rush
3605
well, its...you can't have...oops,someones at the door. gotta run. someone else might help
None of you have stated what's not to like about it. It really shouldn't matter if the gameplays good anyway.
author=Liberty
Here's a bit of constructive critique. Firstly, you've got it set inside a volcano. Great location! A lot can be done with that idea - just look at Heros Realm for example. The problem with this map - and there are quite a few of them - would be the bland mapping. There are no details that give the allusion to being inside said volcano. The snow-fence wouldn't be in a volcano, the glass/see-through floors are just odd. Is it supposed to be a lava waterfall? But then the ice and glass makes no sense. The only good thing in this screen shot are the character sets, but they can't be the main selling point of a game. It just doesn't make sense, even with the description you added. Find another way to convey the images in your mind to the player. Even custom stuff would be better than this.

You are the one that chose this shot to represent your game. Is this how the rest of the game looks? If so, I'm not so sure the staff were being mean to you so much as being nice to the rest of us.


THE GAME is fine. In order to understand the screenshot you must PLAY THE GAME. Judging something is bad because you don't understand it is BAD.
author=Chairmandrek
What the hell is wrong with it though? If people actually tell me what's not to like I can fix it.

Your screenshots need to be organized. Like, from what it looks like, it's just a bunch of stuff thrown together. I would suggest playing through some games to figure out what decent/good mapping is supposed to be look like. Go through the list of featured games to start with. It reeeeeeeeeeally makes a difference. I am by no means great at mapping, but that has helped me (and still does).

THE GAME is fine. In order to understand the screenshot you must PLAY THE GAME. Judging something is bad because you don't understand it is BAD.

You should pick screenshots that best represent your game. If your screenshots just look like a random, cluttered mess, well...

Just practice some more. You really notice a difference the more you do it.
THE MAPPING IS FINE. Not understanding a map should not be enough reason to say "Ahh, the gameplay sucks as well."

Stupid games featuring Alex get accepted.
Liberty
~RTP Princess~
9501
Look - with a bitmore effort on your part you can have a game that looks good as well as plays well and I know it's sad to think that people play games only for the pretties, but unfortunately it's the truth. Most people won't play a game that looks like that.
We can solve this right now. Pick 2 screen shots out of your game that you think looks the best.
Which of the 5 versions of the game that got denied should I pick the images from?
Now we are getting somewhere. Post screen shots of your game from each version showing differences with each one.
Liberty
~RTP Princess~
9501
The best one - the newest one. The one you're most proud of.
author=jakandsig
HAHAHAHAHAHA! No but seriously, you have a glowing red guy next to a volcano while there in space.

author=Jericho
beautiful. astounding. a true masterpiece.


I really hope you're joking.


The stark contrast between the non-euclidiean cavern surrounded by cluttered Egyptian mountain ranges, representing the realm of life, and the pristine, barren white realm representing death brings a tear to my eye. The realm of life is guarded by a mysterious, shadowy, unsavory looking character while the realm of death is guarded by a kindly priest. Who can see which side is truly good or evil? the fact that the two friends are standing on different representative planes of existence is no coincidence, either. I believe Suikoden II did something similar? Perhaps it is YOU who needs to stop joking and take art a little more seriously.
I'll start with the cyberworld. Here's version 2:
author=Jericho
author=jakandsig
HAHAHAHAHAHA! No but seriously, you have a glowing red guy next to a volcano while there in space.

author=Jericho
beautiful. astounding. a true masterpiece.


I really hope you're joking.
The stark contrast between the non-euclidiean cavern surrounded by cluttered Egyptian mountain ranges, representing the realm of life, and the pristine, barren white realm representing death brings a tear to my eye. The realm of life is guarded by a mysterious, shadowy, unsavory looking character while the realm of death is guarded by a kindly priest. Who can see which side is truly good or evil? the fact that the two friends are standing on different representative planes of existence is no coincidence, either. I believe Suikoden II did something similar? Perhaps it is YOU who needs to stop joking and take art a little more seriously.


According to the PM he sent me, the picture is the Cyber world fusing with the Real world. This caused these computer viruses called GX VIRUSES to attack the humans, and the humans sent their navis out to fight the viruses, and the red guy is Terrance, and the Orange guy is MEGAMAN GX. Oh and that cave with the volcanoes and pyramids? That's the base of the police.

Both of you are insane. And have active imaginations.