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Characters:
Skar
Charcteristics:Lazy, Unwilling, Greedy
Age:?????
Race:Eighth-Goblin
Class:Mercenary
Bio: Skar is the main protagonist of the game. He is lazy, greedy, ignorant and won't take a job unless it has good pay. His father is the famous half-dwarf hero of Sector AL-1, Josef. His mother is a half-elf that stole Josef's heart in high school. He and his sister Flora woke up ouside the Sector AL-1 Dome, with no memory of anything but their names and how to fight. Strangely, the Sector AL-1 Dome collapsed when they left, as if their spirits were holding it up.


Flora
Charcteristics:Active,Easygoing,Happy
Age:?????
Race:Tenth-Elf
Class:Medic
Bio:Flora is the second protagonist of the game. She is active, easygoing, happy, and is always willing to take a job. Her father is the famous half-dwarf hero of Sector AL-1, Josef. His mother is a half-elf that stole Josef's heart in high school. She and her brother Skar woke up ouside the Sector AL-1 Dome, with no memory of anything but their names and how to fight. Strangely, the Sector AL-1 Dome collapsed when they left, as if their spirits were holding it up.She has the unique ability to preform first aid without any tools.



Amadeux
Race:Full Dark Elf
Class:Electromancer
Characteristics: Witty, Thoughtful, Huge Ego
Age: Approximately 1,264
Bio:Amadeux is the main antagonist. He does not appear until he introduces himself, whereas you notice his huge ego right away. His motive is that he wants to "fix the world". He was the primary inventor of the Capital Walker. It turns out, it malfunctioned because he sabotaged it. He created "The Hole" to destroy the Capital Walker, but did not mean for it to corrupt everything. He wanted to destroy his creation because he wanted to prove to the Chanore (equivalent of president) that he could do more than just create. He is a kind man, but thinks the only way to get rid of the corruption is to (quoting him) "rid the world of my accidental army of minions and,"*sigh*" eliminate the humans". That's what makes Amadeux a "shakespere character".

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The races seem wrong. Both Scar and Flora has the same parents, so they should be of the same race. Flora also can't be 1/10 elf, the backstory says that she's at least 1/4th elf and even if it didn't, it's not possible to be 1/10 of a lineage.

Looking at the backstory, they are both at least 1/4 elf and 1/4 dwarf. If Scar really is 1/8 goblin, then so is Flora. That leaves 3/8 that are unaccounted for. I would recommend you just write "hybrid" since their linage is so mixed.

I do like the idea of siblings that are a mix of at least four different races though.
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When the going gets tough, go fuck yourself.
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