Heartache 101 ~Sour into Sweet~

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Where will you go when school is out each day?

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spazhero
105
06/30/2011 07:31 AM
man what kindof futuristic shenanigans is this! you can go to the INTERNET...a dangerous treck indead
=S
Dyhalto
1288
06/30/2011 04:15 PM
/me uses Internet to stalk and find out personal information about girl of choice.
flowerthief
Cult of the Chocobo
1442
06/30/2011 06:59 PM
Haha, it should be Internet Cafe. I left it as Internet so that the sub-info like "(Mind + 4)" would fit in the window, but I guess it does look silly. Should probably change it.
LockeZ
The Z is for Znderson; RMN's resident antagonator
1686
06/30/2011 07:04 PM
"Net Cafe" would fit. I can't honestly say I've ever actually seen a net cafe in real life, though.

Also, "Convenient" should be "Convenience". And I'm not sure how a fashion mall is different from a normal mall. I've never heard the term fashion mall before.
flowerthief
Cult of the Chocobo
1442
06/30/2011 07:08 PM
Oh man, you're absolutely right, LockeZ. It should be "Convenience". I feel like an idiot for getting that wrong.

Dyhalto
1288
07/01/2011 03:07 AM
It's okay if the store is conveniently located across the street from the protagonist.
The word "Loo" kind of irks me. It obiously has fashion/look connotation, but what does it mean?
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