This map needs a bit more contrast. Darken the entire area of the sea so the eye can quickly spot what's the focus here. Incidentally, don't use black for the names of locations, try a dark brown instead. And don't split a name in two lines; that makes it look cluttered. Use a smaller sized font if you must, but keep it all in one line.
Edit: Of course it is! What else could it be? :rolleyes: