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-Story-
About three thousand years ago in the world Hallida there was a war between humans and dragons. The humans hated the dragons because they were beautiful and ageless in human form. There jealousy was what caused the war. The humans killed many of the dragons and then took away their rights. The humans then ruled over the Dragon Kingdom and gave the dragons nothing.
One day a warrior named Lyle decided what they were doing was wrong. Even though he was human he had great kindness towards the dragons and other creatures. He accepted those for who they were and never judged anyone. This however caused another war, but this time Lyle sided with the dragons and they formed a peace treaty towards each other.
Now in the new age of peace or so they thought someone is going around destroying kingdoms that belong to humans. No one knows who or why they are doing this.
Characters:
Sengal:
Age: 16
Height: 6’3
Weight: 160lbs
Profile: Sengal is the prince of Korsin. He is not really supposed to leave his castle but he does any way on occasion. He has actually been outside of Korsin City with his best friend Balagan. He has even seen many places and loves to travel. His father died when he was only twelve years old and for some reason he cannot remember anything before he turned ten years old.
Balagan:
Age: 17
Height: 6’4
Weight: 165lbs
Profile: Balagan is Sengal’s best friend they always hang out together. However Balagan is woman crazy and always ends up in trouble with them. Every time he attempts to talk to a woman he says the wrong things and ends up getting the heck slapped out of him or even beat up on occasion. He also very curious which always leads to trouble and Sengal sometimes has to knock some sense into him.
Alya
Age: 16
Weight: 125lbs
Height: 5’
Profile: Alya is the Princess of Harwell Town. She is always attending to those in need. She usually likes to walk around the town and keep an eye on things. She is kind and cheerful, but she also has a very bad temper. However when she joins Sengal she seems to be hiding something.
Rycian:
Age: 20
Weight: 155lbs
Height: 6’
Profile: Rycian is the Prince of the castle in a town that was destroyed by his mother. He really hates his mother because of the cruel things she has done to people. However he would do anything to help his friends or anyone in need. He plans to get his mother off of the throne somehow so that he can restore the city nearby that she destroyed and help out more people.
Monique
Age: 19
Weight: 128lbs
Height: 5’1
Profile: Monique is the Princess of the Dragon Kingdom and has been in charge since her parents were killed by a mysterious man and woman. She does all she can to protect the Dragon Kingdom even though she is very stressed out. When she found out that someone stole her mother’s Dragon Necklace she set out with Sengal to find them. She is an ice dragon and can turn into dragon form during battle since she has her Dragon Bracelet.
Credits:
Scripts:
Yanfly's Battle Engine Melody
KGC's Large Party
Mog's Event Sensor Range
Diakonos's Battle Back by area
Shanghai's Fancy Deaths
Shanghai's Wareforms
Shanghai's Enemy Linked Deaths
Graphics:
Mack's Tiles
Mack's Character Sets
Mack's Character Generator
A cool text Generator for the title words here's the link if you want to try it:
http://cooltext.com/
Faces are from Tails in the sky by Nihon Falcom
Music:
Enterbain
Breath of Fire
Zelda
Final Fantasy Mystic Quest
Lufia2
About three thousand years ago in the world Hallida there was a war between humans and dragons. The humans hated the dragons because they were beautiful and ageless in human form. There jealousy was what caused the war. The humans killed many of the dragons and then took away their rights. The humans then ruled over the Dragon Kingdom and gave the dragons nothing.
One day a warrior named Lyle decided what they were doing was wrong. Even though he was human he had great kindness towards the dragons and other creatures. He accepted those for who they were and never judged anyone. This however caused another war, but this time Lyle sided with the dragons and they formed a peace treaty towards each other.
Now in the new age of peace or so they thought someone is going around destroying kingdoms that belong to humans. No one knows who or why they are doing this.
Characters:
Sengal:
Age: 16
Height: 6’3
Weight: 160lbs
Profile: Sengal is the prince of Korsin. He is not really supposed to leave his castle but he does any way on occasion. He has actually been outside of Korsin City with his best friend Balagan. He has even seen many places and loves to travel. His father died when he was only twelve years old and for some reason he cannot remember anything before he turned ten years old.
Balagan:
Age: 17
Height: 6’4
Weight: 165lbs
Profile: Balagan is Sengal’s best friend they always hang out together. However Balagan is woman crazy and always ends up in trouble with them. Every time he attempts to talk to a woman he says the wrong things and ends up getting the heck slapped out of him or even beat up on occasion. He also very curious which always leads to trouble and Sengal sometimes has to knock some sense into him.
Alya
Age: 16
Weight: 125lbs
Height: 5’
Profile: Alya is the Princess of Harwell Town. She is always attending to those in need. She usually likes to walk around the town and keep an eye on things. She is kind and cheerful, but she also has a very bad temper. However when she joins Sengal she seems to be hiding something.
Rycian:
Age: 20
Weight: 155lbs
Height: 6’
Profile: Rycian is the Prince of the castle in a town that was destroyed by his mother. He really hates his mother because of the cruel things she has done to people. However he would do anything to help his friends or anyone in need. He plans to get his mother off of the throne somehow so that he can restore the city nearby that she destroyed and help out more people.
Monique
Age: 19
Weight: 128lbs
Height: 5’1
Profile: Monique is the Princess of the Dragon Kingdom and has been in charge since her parents were killed by a mysterious man and woman. She does all she can to protect the Dragon Kingdom even though she is very stressed out. When she found out that someone stole her mother’s Dragon Necklace she set out with Sengal to find them. She is an ice dragon and can turn into dragon form during battle since she has her Dragon Bracelet.
Credits:
Scripts:
Yanfly's Battle Engine Melody
KGC's Large Party
Mog's Event Sensor Range
Diakonos's Battle Back by area
Shanghai's Fancy Deaths
Shanghai's Wareforms
Shanghai's Enemy Linked Deaths
Graphics:
Mack's Tiles
Mack's Character Sets
Mack's Character Generator
A cool text Generator for the title words here's the link if you want to try it:
http://cooltext.com/
Faces are from Tails in the sky by Nihon Falcom
Music:
Enterbain
Breath of Fire
Zelda
Final Fantasy Mystic Quest
Lufia2
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RPG Maker VX- RPG
- 09/09/2011 02:10 AM
- 10/07/2012 08:22 PM
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shun
CloseHi sorry I have not replied to this in a while. I knew this is very late I just haven not been here in awhile.
@Warprincess116
Thank you very much! I do plan to make another game. I am currently working on two right now that are called Mystic Knights, and a scfi fantasy Soul Reign in the new RPG Maker VX Ace. I will make sure I put them here :)
@andrepawny
I agree I did make them a little too easy. I just didn't want anyone to get frustrated or the monsters and bosses to do too much damage in the beginning, but now that I know people want a challenge I will try my best to make my next games harder. I do agree the characters don't have a lot of abilities the problem I have there is I get a little bit of writers block in that area but I will try to give my characters more abilities in my next games. Thank you for replying. :)
@Warprincess116
Thank you very much! I do plan to make another game. I am currently working on two right now that are called Mystic Knights, and a scfi fantasy Soul Reign in the new RPG Maker VX Ace. I will make sure I put them here :)
@andrepawny
I agree I did make them a little too easy. I just didn't want anyone to get frustrated or the monsters and bosses to do too much damage in the beginning, but now that I know people want a challenge I will try my best to make my next games harder. I do agree the characters don't have a lot of abilities the problem I have there is I get a little bit of writers block in that area but I will try to give my characters more abilities in my next games. Thank you for replying. :)
author=Natsu_Luffy
for child's game.not suited in teenager.
Please be contructive, if there is something that you don't like about my game, please express it contructivally.
Yes that is an opition in this maker. What happened was after I tested the event I noticed that I forgot to make the character move and made him move the wrong way and didn't realize it. The problem is fixed now though and I reuploaded it so it shouldn't freeze this time.
I umm sort of figured that it was because i was walking into the desk, and that the event would not proceed until it heard the end of the movement, so checking the "ignore if can't walk" thing or whatever it was should fix the problem. Is that option in this version of rpg maker?
@phatkookies: I'll check the event but they strange thing it didn't freeze when I test played the whole game, but I'll check the event and try to figure out why. Until I figure it out please try exiting the game nad restarting your computer to see if it continues to freeze.
EDIT:
I don't know what to do because it doesn't freeze at all when I test play it. Does anyone know why it is freezing for other people and not me? I really need help fixing this problem. If anyone knows what is going on and I can help I'll PM them the non-encrypted project to take a look at.
EDIT2: Never mind figured it out, fixed it and reuploaded it. It was just a move event error but it is fixed now. So just redownload it and put it in another folder and copy your save. I am sorry for the error.
EDIT:
I don't know what to do because it doesn't freeze at all when I test play it. Does anyone know why it is freezing for other people and not me? I really need help fixing this problem. If anyone knows what is going on and I can help I'll PM them the non-encrypted project to take a look at.
EDIT2: Never mind figured it out, fixed it and reuploaded it. It was just a move event error but it is fixed now. So just redownload it and put it in another folder and copy your save. I am sorry for the error.
BurningTyger
779
author=VerinciaRight. Also consider fleshing out the NPCs a bit. Give them relatives, quirks, and link them to other characters.
I have a difficult time with that as well, one way is have a theme for every city. One city experienced an assassination attempt. Another (more small town) has a child that shines above the rest of the local population. One is getting ready for war. A new law is getting passed. There are lots of different possibilities with themes, and then you have the majority of the inhabitants talk about that theme. Always have a few that talk about the bigger picture, or don't, but that's one way to broaden the dialogue of the static, NPCs.
MAybe Harwell Town's bladesmith is the son of Koursin's armorer, but left after a disagreement; maybe one of the barkeeps at the pub has a crush on Alya and scrambles his words when she's in the party; maybe the potion seller in the Dragon Kingdom is afraid of frogs. Things like that.
(And don't kingdoms have princesses, towns mayor's daughters?)
Thank you! Don't forgot to tell what you think but be honset it's good to know what I need to work to make my games better.
obsorber
1289
Looked at screen-shots, thought game looked nice so I downloaded. Will read information about your story after some in game experience. Kudos!
Verincia
141
I have a difficult time with that as well, one way is have a theme for every city. One city experienced an assassination attempt. Another (more small town) has a child that shines above the rest of the local population. One is getting ready for war. A new law is getting passed. There are lots of different possibilities with themes, and then you have the majority of the inhabitants talk about that theme. Always have a few that talk about the bigger picture, or don't, but that's one way to broaden the dialogue of the static, NPCs.
Thank you for pointing that out. I know I need to work on that. The only problem I have is that I have a hard time thinking of what to make the NPCs say. Do you have any suggestions on what I can make them say or talk about?
demonlord5000
414
I can help elaborate for ichimaru on that. It's partly because the world you made doesn't have alot of npc, and doesn't really feel alive. In fact the towns feel rather deserted. The other thing is that the cutscenes are too short, and there isn't enough dialog to really make them interesting. It's an alright start if you havn't made any games, and a good chance to get valuable feedback for future projects.
UPDATED The game and fixed a game crashing error.
Ichimaru_Gin thank you for your feedback but I don't understand why you think that the characters are not interesting. I am not mad or taking it the wrong way I just don't understand. Also I hope you are not going by what I explained about them because I am very bad at explaining things like that. Again I am not mad or taking it the wrong way I just don't undertand.
Ichimaru_Gin thank you for your feedback but I don't understand why you think that the characters are not interesting. I am not mad or taking it the wrong way I just don't understand. Also I hope you are not going by what I explained about them because I am very bad at explaining things like that. Again I am not mad or taking it the wrong way I just don't undertand.
author=demonlord5000I thought that I fixed that error. Let me ask if I can reuplod it. For right now I'll tell you where to go. You actually don't go thourgh the door. You go to the room to with the map. It's 12:00 AM in the state I am in so I'll ask if I can reupload the game and upload it tomarrow as soon as I get up. I have to go to bed for now.
The name of the town is harwell, and the place it traps me is dragon castle. Thankfully the name places are in the menu, and i saved before getting trapped.
Edit: Just did another trip around town, and theres a bench i can walk on.
Went to harwell castle (why did the guards not speak..and let me waltz in...got the cutscene and teleported back to my castle...went back to harwell...and examined the throne doors. Game crashed saying couldnt find faceset drago. Also, if you try to go up the stairs, mary will still say she doesnt keep the map up there...even though mary is no longer with you.
EDIT: I can't seem to edit the download for some reason. I really need to put up the fixed version
