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Clareain_Christopher- 07/26/2012 10:35 AM
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Galv
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CloseI like this one too, I really like the hair. And something is just so nice about gold and blue.
author=Galv
I like this one too, I really like the hair. And something is just so nice about gold and blue.
author=SanaThanks guys.
I really like the..err..uhm..yeah~ B3
As note, she can sell you some good items at the start of the game. The only problem is that the prices for those items are a little higher than normal...
But it is possible to grind money, or save enough to buy those items that deal 5000 damage.
1 hour in the game and you're dealing 5k. Grats.
Zephyr
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I think you should add eye-white to the eyes of your characters.
It irks me a little, as the sprite seems to have it.
But if it's a thing with your character design, I won't bother again.
It irks me a little, as the sprite seems to have it.
But if it's a thing with your character design, I won't bother again.
author=ZephyrI think it would fit me if I was to change all my sprites.
I think you should add eye-white to the eyes of your characters.
It irks me a little, as the sprite seems to have it.
But if it's a thing with your character design, I won't bother again.
Let me play around with that. Thank you for sharing :)
author=Adon237That's a pretty steep price~She can sell me some good items alright.I personally love the goggles, blue and gold, nice work!
Is this an old drawing by any chance? I liked the other drawing you posted, but in this one you reintroduced everything that was wrong before. An excess of careless lines (specially around the hair) as opposed to just a few stylized ones. And a coloring heavy on shadows and highlights as opposed to flat colors and smooth gradients... Please, bring the good back. xP
author=alteregoWell a good amount of the skin design is because of her race, but I hear what you're talking about.
Is this an old drawing by any chance? I liked the other drawing you posted, but in this one you reintroduced everything that was wrong before. An excess of careless lines (specially around the hair) as opposed to just a few stylized ones. And a coloring heavy on shadows and highlights as opposed to flat colors and smooth gradients... Please, bring the good back. xP
I guess I had too much fun with her hair -I dunno. I'll see what I can do with later designs. I'm still trying to work on new map lighting effects you gave me tips for.
"careless lines?" I was going for a somewhat messy hairstyle, but may I ask if that's the whole thing, or just the outer lines? If it's the whole thing, then darn...
What really ruins it is the coloring, imo. Color should be a complement to your lineart. It should help giving flow and volume to the hair, but you went a bit wild with it. It's like you wanted full 'digital painting' hair when this cartoony style doesn't really call for it. The result is well, messy, but not in the way you wanted... If you want to emphasize color and detail you should reduce the use thick lines. But if you want the lineart to stay you should use subtler shading. I'm sure there's a way to mix both, but you're not pulling it off.
author=alteregoOkay.
What really ruins it is the coloring, imo. Color should be a complement to your lineart. It should help giving flow and volume to the hair, but you went a bit wild with it. It's like you wanted full 'digital painting' hair when this cartoony style doesn't really call for it. The result is well, messy, but not in the way you wanted... If you want to emphasize color and detail you should reduce the use thick lines. But if you want the lineart to stay you should use subtler shading. I'm sure there's a way to mix both, but you're not pulling it off.
I'll play around with that. I'll probably go for the simple shading, since that won't cause too much of an art shift.
pyrofiend324
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author=Galv
I don't know which are the careless lines, I think the hair turned out good...
Gonna have to agree there. It seems putting a lot of lines and effort into hair is that one thing that a lot of people seem to notice about your style, which is good, since people are beginning to recognize it. Remember Clar, you don't necessarily have to give in to every critique given to you. I like the hair as it is, in my opinion, and I really don't see very much of the lines. The hair, I find, is supposed to be messy, and by putting lines in there I find it complements that.
author=pyrofiend324I see...author=GalvGonna have to agree there. It seems putting a lot of lines and effort into hair is that one thing that a lot of people seem to notice about your style, which is good, since people are beginning to recognize it. Remember Clar, you don't necessarily have to give in to every critique given to you. I like the hair as it is, in my opinion, and I really don't see very much of the lines. The hair, I find, is supposed to be messy, and by putting lines in there I find it complements that.
I don't know which are the careless lines, I think the hair turned out good...
Well I don't really want to say that I give in- as much as I try to compromise.
I really like this picture, honestly- and would never redraw it until it personally bothers me.
But at the same time, I try to implement new ideas into my works without radically changing the style i.e fully painted characters or super-realistic designs.
But I guess you can say that I'm still not used to conflicting opinions.
Well, if you want a third opinion, I also do not see what ae is aiming at, I find the lines and the colors precisely fit well together , make a whole (where often the two are too distrinctly separate), with a fine result.
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