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I am currently working on updating this page. As a warning, things could get horrifyingly messy round' these parts. Also, take pity on a busy man. I tussle with myself as to how much info I should release before I feel the overall painting is ready to be viewed by non-Graay eyes. In the coming months I may start posting more images/info. A demo is in the works, but is absurdly messy at the moment.

Update: Thar Be Episodic Content Ahoy!

The game was getting rather unwieldy. Between file size and sheer craziness in RPG Maker itself, I've decided to most likely split the game into thirds, maybe?

Possibly.

As always, comments and criticism is highly appreciated. Tell me I suck if you need to, but at least let me know!






In the dim histories, remembered only by the darkened ruins of grandeur now lost, our people were the chosen of all the Children. Tasked as wardens of the Creator’s great works, we lorded over the lands below from our cities amidst the heavens. Haughty in our wisdom and power; blinded to the chasm looming before us by our hubris, we grew cold to those whom we were tasked to uplift and to the oaths forged into our very blood.

It is upon the arrogance and foolhardy pursuit of further glories that our ancestors built the torment of the world. The Fall is our curse; the punishment for unbearable sins.

As the corrupting Shadows flow over the lands, it is to the past we must look for our salvation. Once before we have abandoned the duty given us, now the Creator has seen fit to grant our people one chance to make amends. I pray; for the sake of the world and of all the Children, that we have grown from our folly. With the Prophecy to guide us, the Light of the Creator to uphold us, we will make war upon the ancient foe in desperate defense of our existence.






Foretold at the moment of creation by the Light made flesh, for a time when the world drowns in sorrow and the Shadow of Fear rests heavily upon the hearts of the Children.
Thusly it was written that Thirty Ages and One Day shall turn afore the sins of the Eldest come acircle.

When all the Light of the world dims, as all hope is fleeting
When upon the Alabaster Throne sits Fear and upon the Golden Throne sits Despair
Reborn again shall be the Light

He shall be a beacon of the Light to wash clean the Fallen
His sword shall be a ray of dawn to pierce the Heart of Dhoome
His word shall be judgment
His will shall be suffered
He shall set free the Children in his fury
Upon the precipice he shall stand vigilant and come to know his Truth





The Third Empire is in disarray, the Church has been defaced and the faith of the land falters, and the lesser kingdoms of the Children wage open war amongst themselves. What precious few vestiges remain of the glory and magnificence of ancient times are beginning to fade, and the Children of the Creator are beset by strife and pain.

Even now whispers of rebellion echo through halls of the Empire’s seat of power: Rumaire. Long buried divisions are beginning to mar the walls of the apparently pristine Empire; Royal house against Noble House, Common House trampled underneath both. Kept secret from the Empire at large, skirmishes with the Fallen have brought uncertainty to the victory paid for so dearly nearly many ages past. Despite all efforts, the rumors spread and the words of the city are tinged with fear. Very soon blood will stain crimson the alabaster stones of the mountain city.

Amidst all of the bureaucratic maneuvering of the Empire, the long standing Order of the Light Beholden have lost face with both the Eldest and the younger races of the land. Overbearing, and drunk on power and haughty elitism, the Church have pushed the Southlands and Baronies to turn their back on the faith. Crystal worship has sprung up like chokeweeds throughout the populace. Desperate for control, the Order have reinstated the ancient laws of the First Empire and are brutally punishing those who’s belief in the Creator has waned. Where the violence of the Capitol is only waiting to break the skin, the actions of the Church are a raw wound; the blood of the innocent seeping into the ground.

Foulest of all, are the atrocities strangling the Lesser Kingdoms. Chaos rules the Southlands and the kingdoms of Man. As the Empire draws inward to face its own troubles, the stability it lent the south has vanished, leaving the pillars of order to collapse. It has been two full ages since the last Imperial Legion sailed north. Two thousand years to the Eldest is a lifetime, to Man it is eternity. The Empire has nearly been forgotten by the lesser races of the south, tales of its majesty are but legends. Nations vie for power amidst the ruins of great cities abandoned ages ago. Warlords and tyrants capitalize of the abandonment of the faith by the mortals. Countless thousands are dying in the name of trumped of bandit kings and mercenary lords, oaths given to whatever idols their leaders conjure up. Along the frontier shadowed beasts ravage the lands, hinting at the festering sickness hidden beneath the violence. The Children’s lifeblood flows freely upon the rocks, the death of Man draws near.

In the dark the ancient enemy stirs. Fiercely hungry, the Shadow lusts for ruin. Where has the Light fled, what has become of our Champion? What terror have we wrought?



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A Question For You.

A friend of mine recently made a comment during his play through of the demo; he suggested that I provide each of the possible characters multiple classes to select from, as opposed to the permanent one they are outfitted with now. His argument was that certain personas turned him off from characters that he liked to have combat wise, and that he would like for the companions whose personality he did like to fill that spot in the party. I have pondered it for a bit now, and have come to the conclusion that I really have no opinion upon the matter.

The game is not so far along that something like this couldn't be changed relatively easily. No primary balance work has been done, and what plot reworking this would require is a drop in the bucket against what remains unfinished anyway.

So, I have come to ask you fine chaps what you would prefer before I post all of the characters to The Characters page.

One on hand, we have the method that I have been using to date. Each character that you will encounter has a predetermined role in battle. If you do not like a companion for his persona/attitude/class/looks/whatever, there a numerous more to choose from. The upside to this path is that each of the characters classes are very much a part of who they are in regards to the plot and their interactions with others in the party.

The compromise that I have decided upon would be that each character comes with a small selections of different 'flavors' to choose from. This would mean that one of the distinguishing features of that individual in regards to the plot would be diminished somewhat.



Geoffrey the Wizard School Dropout-
Note: Geoffrey is not necessarily representative of any character in Crystal, serving primarily as an example for this discussion.

If I did not change the way class worked, Geoffrey would probably be called something like 'Bumbling Amateur Mage' or whatnot. He would posses a mostly predetermined skill selection, slightly modifiable through the equipping of different crystals. He could roast his enemies with a shoddy version of Flame, reveal his true lack of skill with a barely successful Needles of Ice, and completely miss that enraged Bearzombiecatduck charging the party.

If I did change things, Geoffrey could choose between classes such as: Bumbling Amateur Mage, Questionable Frost Wizard, Awkward Tome Chanter, and Clumsy Mage Knight. Each of the possible classes would contain both base spells that carry over all choices, and a selection of spells and abilities specific to that path. A character would still primarily fill the same role within the group, but could round out the party if it was lacking in certain areas. This would mean that the overall picture of who that person is would be a bit muddied.

Bumbling Amateur Mage:
The Amateur Mage is a spectacle of wasted potential. It is quite obvious that had only the upcoming spellcaster applied themselves during training, that they would be immensely powerful and influential in the magical world. This not being the case, the Amateur Mage is only barely able to cast the most basic on incantations and cantrips.


Questionable Frost Wizard:
The Frost Wizard is the least impressive of all practitioners of the arcane arts. Chosen by layabouts and dullards, the School of Frostly Delights lacks practical application outside of making beautiful ice sculptures. However, it should be noted that this particular artist is incompetent and capable only of hideous ice sculptures.


Awkward Tome Chanter:
The Tome Chanter can barely be considered a mage at all. Open to all who posses basic literacy, the Chanter reads from dusty old scrolls protesting the power of the arcane arts to those in attendance. Displays are usually met with indifference and often boredom. Applications outside of the classroom are few, including only terrible attacks upon ones enemies mind through sheer annoyance and doldrum.


Clumsy Mage Knight:
A famous and honorable order of knights comprise the ranks of these armored mages. Fearsom and quite deadly upon the battlefield; the Mage Knight combines both fanciful swordplay with destructive spells, all the while encased in enchanted armor. This once prestigious order is now sullied by the presence of this fool knight. More deadly to himself and allies with his blade than to enemies, this oaf is likely to roast his own pants before slaying any beast. It remains unknown how this fool managed to receive entry into, let alone graduate from the order.


Assuming that either option would be equally well done; what would you prefer?
I would appreciate any feedback/general dismay at Graay or other ideas that you would put foreward.

As always, thank you for your comments and criticisms.
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I love your maps, subscribed!
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I love your maps, subscribed!
I concur.
Awesome parallax maps!
Makes me wanna ditch the normal RTP mapping for good
Thanks for your encouragement! I was worried that the parallaxed maps wouldn't be liked. I feel that I am hopefully improving enough that, given time, I may redo the first few of my maps.

Thanks again for the feedback, every bit helps!
Subbed as soon as I saw those beauterrific maps~ ^o^
Creator (called The Watcher by some): Created the heavens and the earth, yada yada, yada ya... Is a pretty cool guy. Eh(should be He) creates all of existence and doesnt(should be isnt) afraid of anything. Now cares a significantly less amount for his bothersome Children.(He) May have left.
Hope i helped with your grammar. :) My way of saying im looking at your game, sounds fun.

EDIT: Forgot to say, i love the upgraded headquarters thing. I loved azure dreams, breath of fire, sweet lily dreams, and Steambot Chronicles because they all had house upgrades or decorations. Its always fun to do that.
First off...

I would like to thank everyone that has commented (Or subbed!) for their feedback.
I was very unsure how this whole experience would work out. I haven't really blogged or anything of the sort before. I haven't been all that successful at RPG Maker thus far, Crystal being the only game that I would call anything other than a massive, hopeless, soul-crushing, despair inducing, utter failure...

So this is a bit new to me!

The positivity and encouragement have given me a real desire to push this through to the end.

Also, I apologize bigtime! That was a poor attempt at humor. The whole 'pretty cool guy, doesnt afraid of anything' was intentional. Moving forward I promise to use no such memes!
I tend to use somewhat of a shorthand method of communication as well. If that is confusing or irritating I apologize in advance, go ahead and call me out on it guys.

Further...!
I had mentioned a certain 'Update Storm' that would occur with the launch of the demo. Well, I have decided to release a 'mini-storm', if you will! I will make all my replies quickly and will hop right on that!

Thanks again! As always, your feedback is HIGHLY appreciated.
No worries man, doesnt bother me i just wanted to point it out because you asked. Also i got a few laughs out of your writing up there, so tell your best friend to stuff it. :) (jk) Welcome aboard and good luck.
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