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Caz- 09/15/2012 11:05 AM
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Pretty cool. I like the brown building except for the roof.
I really like the hay on and around it.
*corrected spelling
I really like the hay on and around it.
*corrected spelling
Thanks for the feedback! I think I'll get rid of that brown building, if not at least fix that awful roof.. but if I got rid of it, I'd put hay around that other building instead. ^^
I really like the brown building as well, i wouldnt get rid of it completely, just fix that roof. also, your trees, on a real tree, the scratchiness would be verticle, not horrizontal, the barck on the tree is what im refering too. I like what youve got here though :)
Thanks for the comments, guys!
@Incarnate - I think I see what you mean.. I'll try "scratching" them vertically instead of horizontal when I update this next. :P
@Incarnate - I think I see what you mean.. I'll try "scratching" them vertically instead of horizontal when I update this next. :P
Was this updated? 'Cause I'm not seeing anything wrong with this. Though, that apple tree by the barn looks oddly familiar, somehow...
This hasn't yet been updated, but the tree trunks needed more shadowing anyway to stop them from looking so flat. And yes, I did write that tutorial so it makes sense that I'd use the same technique, don't you think? :P
How do we feel about warped corrugated roofs?
Is there too much of a clash in colour, or does it just straight-out not look right?
Is there too much of a clash in colour, or does it just straight-out not look right?
Sorry, the image was huge so I put it in hide tags in the previous post. Is it visible or broken? :P
Oh, I am totally blind. Haha.
I like it, though I would make less warping. The warping on the right is great, the warping to the left of it is a bit much and looks unnatural to me. Less warping, less melting the roof :P
I do love the roof, though! Run with that. And my hay stays, woo.
I like it, though I would make less warping. The warping on the right is great, the warping to the left of it is a bit much and looks unnatural to me. Less warping, less melting the roof :P
I do love the roof, though! Run with that. And my hay stays, woo.
I'll see what I can do about fixing up that warping. I'm never particularly happy about the warp tool in most editing programs, but because it's corrugated material it wouldn't make much sense if it didn't bend out of shape before it tore.. Maybe some better shadowing and outlining will give it a more natural look. Glad you like the rest of it though! And yes, yes.. you shall get more of your hay soon. XD
Thanks Link! ^^
Bit of a colour change, fixed the roof up a bit and put some rust on it.. I think the depth of the colour on the metal makes the other barn roof look a little flat by comparison. Maybe I'll put some brightening on the sunny-side of that too. And then more hay.

Bit of a colour change, fixed the roof up a bit and put some rust on it.. I think the depth of the colour on the metal makes the other barn roof look a little flat by comparison. Maybe I'll put some brightening on the sunny-side of that too. And then more hay.

That looks great! Much better warping.
I agree it looks better than the barn roof now
Oh and more hay, yay haha :P
I agree it looks better than the barn roof now
Oh and more hay, yay haha :P












