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Irili- Added: 01/28/2013 02:56 PM
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LockeZ
I'd really like to get rid of LockeZ. His play style is way too unpredictable. He's always like this too. If he ran a country, he'd just kill and imprison people at random until crime stopped.
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CloseThere's not much going on here. Usually I'd say the floor space could probably be drastically reduced, but in this case the size is actually about right for a hotel lobby, and the problem is more that there's just no furniture. There should probably be several lounge chairs for guests to wait in, and a couple tables with chairs to sit and eat at.
I can instantly tell it's the front lobby, though, which is good. What you've got is good, it just needs more!
I can instantly tell it's the front lobby, though, which is good. What you've got is good, it just needs more!
It definitely is a bit bare. As LockeZ said, as a hotel lobby it needs something for people to sit on, maybe a decorative feature in the middle of the room? Some pot plants could work. Just something to break up the blankness.
Otherwise, not too bad. I do recommend bringing the stairs down one tile, though. And using small doors, though that's more a personal gripe.
Otherwise, not too bad. I do recommend bringing the stairs down one tile, though. And using small doors, though that's more a personal gripe.
FURNITURE!!! Also, who's saying "Complimentary breakfast. Yay!"? Is it the girl in front of the food? The face doesn't match the sprite... But that's beside the point. It looks empty. As I said before, FURNITURE!!!
Welp! It has been long since you uploaded this image and you probably have already changed lots of things, but just as a general advice, it's always a good idea to avoid such painfully obvious symmetry. This room is just a rectangle with two doors in the middle and two carpets on each side. Yuk! ...I'd probably move those elements around a bit to help dispel that effect.
But what I really wanted to say is that it would be nice to see some progress here. To see the fruits of the feedback you've gotten. =)
But what I really wanted to say is that it would be nice to see some progress here. To see the fruits of the feedback you've gotten. =)
Irili
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Thank you for all of the advice everyone! I love Luna's tiles and they fit so well with a lot of the RTP that I'm going to start making tilesets with them (no distribution of said tilesets of course) so that I can use them in this project.
I've made some improvements yes? Opinions?
I've made some improvements yes? Opinions?
Improvements have been made! I like it. Where's the chubby maid innkeeper? lol
Hmmm... The back wall looks a little crowded. Looks nice though.
Hmmm... The back wall looks a little crowded. Looks nice though.
Yeah, that looks better. Following up on my previous advice, I'd probably move around the right carpet a bit more. Maybe make it 'horizontal' under the waiting area? Also, perhaps placing both doors close to each other, with the table between the doors and the stairs? ...One more thing. Isn't the main door way too big? Five tiles is kind of the RTP equivalent of a school bus and a car. xD
Irili
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@Alterego: Haha! It does look like it's five tiles wide doesn't it? I assure you, it isn't. The message window just blocks it is all. The walls actually just descend and make a 1 space opening for the door like so: |__ __| I'm also playing with carpets right now. Thank you for the continued advice and critique! :)
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