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Gourd Clae Reviews

The Story Generator is a fairly interesting *ahem-do-I-even-have-to-say* that I certainly enjoyed! Not really any reason for a format for this particular review as this is more of a resource than a game. Not to say I didn't have fun exploring the scenarios it had to offer, though it does have a few minor flaws even if some of them are near unavoidable.
Mmmm, tasty plots, let's eat it up~

First of all would have to be the music choice. While the songs played aren't bad, they only fit in with a few of the genres available despite the genres seeming more important than the setting. (The setting is what the music was based off.) I'd change this. I loved the ideas that were thrown in here, though sometimes they would be bad for the story as well. For example, butt groping seems to be a common motive for the antagonist and it can destroy the feelings you have toward the plot! This isn't really a problem for the romance genre, but imagine more serious plots with this motive. Finally, the structure for the stories is pretty predictable and it can make combing the stories for ideas a little aggravating (though maybe I'm just impatient).

In the end, it's pretty handy as far as a plot generator goes. Though it's best to choose and pick the ideas you like for your story than to use them raw, it can be a little frustrating with near the same stories and ideas.

3/5

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I'm glad you enjoyed my Generator!
-- Good suggestion on making the music fit the Genre rather than the Setting. I hadn't considered that they might actually clash with each other. It also appears that I need to shift a few things around. (Note to self: Too much butt-groping can be bad for the plot...) I definitely agree that using the ideas Raw isn't the best way to go. It's meant to be a tool for inspiration more than an Easy-Bake Story Maker.

Thank you for your very informative review!

Respectfully,
-- OokamiKasumi
You're welcome! Thanks for making the generator for me to review~
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