I been hard at work with the artwork. I was redrawing everyone way too many times. So I had a friend from college help me out. Here is the pictures of Keldanite, and Raven. Raven is not finished yet.
This one of Raven is not done yet.
My friend was a great help with touching things up. I hope to get this game finished soon. I also changed a few things for the game's story.
Looking good. If I have a single gripe, it's with his shoulders. One is smoothed down from his neck, which is good, and the other juts out from his torso, which isn't as good. Try smoothing out his left shoulder too (our right).
Oooh that looks much better! Dyhalto is right about the shoulder, and perhaps some of the lines could be straighter, but overall the portrait is looking good~