The only issue I see here is that blocky waterfall... it looks awkward beside those narrow streams. If having it be animated is important to you, I suggest using events!
I meant to fix that, actually it used to look much worse, I just need to widen the cliffs a little more on the charaset I used. . .it is animated, btw.
oh my god- i just now looked at the town and... are the buildings represented on the world map accurate to those presented in the town!?
if they are, you can have my first born