STORYTELLER'S PROFILE

I'm a guy who's kinda overwhelmed college and he pressure of work right now..

I made the Koli's Sorrow series just recently, so if you've got some good criticism, lay it on me. I'm currently working on the Sanctum Security series, starting with Colors of War, focusing on the Summon Soldier unit. It's in the making, but a demo is out. I would like for anyone who's out enough to read this to download my game and tell me of any wrongs in it, and maybe suggest additions or editions to the game.