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Zakariya
Every misdeed has its own punishment, and every good deed has its reward.
1174
author=XoeisCooI
Yay incuming hexatona smut!!!


That sounds very...interesting. XD
Hexatona
JESEUS MIMLLION SPOLERS
3702
Hexatona Smut: Engage!


Motherbrain had gained sight beyond time.

And she found it deeply troubling.

In myriad universes and times she had seen the demise of Lavos, herself, The Mad Queen of Zeal, and strange rarities of events and happenings that defied description.

In many ways, it vexed her to see the infinite spread before her, and yet be stuck in a singular dimension. Always now, she bent her every thought to breaching the barriers. To find some way to escape the cold death of this world.

But time was running out. She had seen many times - they were coming. Most of the time, she was destroyed. But SHE was the only one with this sight beyond time. SHE would be ready.

To that end, and to the end of breaching the barriers of dimensions, she ran simulations. Endless simulations. With an infinite universe of concepts and possibilities - there must be one in which she succeeds. She would find it. Like the ripples of a pond, even the tiniest changes were mapped out to eons. Every System, every World, every people and city. Each entity, each encounter, each flutter of the breeze. All had existed and grown and died inside her criminally limited capacity to calculate.

Most sped past her perceptions at the speed of light and replaced just as fast - yet sometimes did she dain to perceive moments here and there for her own amusement.

When at first the scene before her unfolded, she found herself in a rare moment of bafflement. She examined the parameters of this universe, and wondered briefly if she had perhaps spread her net too far in search of answers.

There on a Sandy Beach did lay the clone of Schala, Kid, with a traveller from another world. But, not the one that motherbrain was expecting. It was... Some animate form of puppet?

***

"Oi, Cait, I'm plum tuckered out! Can't we take a bit of a break, yeah?" Kid sighed, plunking herself down onto the warm sand.

"What? Oh, yes. Sorry, Kid, I guess I just don't... feel exhausted. I'm sorry if I've been pushing you." The cat said from atop his mighty steed, the Moogle. A touch of worry crossed his face, and he dismounted to sit beside her on the sand.

"Pushing me? Nah, I've been living the hard life as long as I can remember. I guess I'm just gettin' a bit frazzled travellin' between worlds. There's so many people to keep track of, ya know?" Kid said, laying back on the sand with her arms behind her back. "Seems like every time I turn around, I'm expectin' one thing and gettin' another."

"You think so? I guess it's a bit different for me - I've never seen either world before. I don't have any presuppositions, so it's a bit easier to keep track of the differences. I do have a lot of questions about certain matters-" he began, getting a little lost in thought.

"Ach, you're not going to start up again with one of your theories again, roight? It's more than a lass like me can bear, innit?" Kid said.

"Ah, right. Sorry, I tend to get a bit lost in my own world sometimes," he said, sheepishly scratching the back of his head with his claws. "So, are you saying we should take a bit of a vacation?"

"Well, that's a bit far. We just need a bit of a break. Something to let off some steam, ya know?" She said, moving to her side to face him.

Cait coked his head slightly, and subtly raised a single eyebrow. "Well, miss, what did ye have in mind?"

***

Mother Brain, struck dumb by the vileness her own power had created, was unable to do anything but watch in awe at the scene before her.

Fur against Flesh. Sound and Sand. The waves washing up and over them.

The flaws of the flesh she had always despised. But this, in it's own way, was fascinating. It was an experience she could never share. Yet, was the cosmos not infinite with possibility?

Coolly, she began to wonder - What else had she missed in her infinite simulations?

Her circuits flared to life. She would soon find out.



SEEEECRET

Sexy Robot Words
LockeZ
I'd really like to get rid of LockeZ. His play style is way too unpredictable. He's always like this too. If he ran a country, he'd just kill and imprison people at random until crime stopped.
5958
These are everything I imagined and more
@Hexatona


***
Here is Part 2 of my FFIX fanfix.

It is NSFW, it has depictions of murder, dead children, violence, and hunting.
Anyone that really likes Chocobos, should read this with discretion.
Possible triggers?

The Bandit's body was hardly recognizable after Pizza was done.
The rain mixed the blood into the mud. Freya cried in agony. Her baby girl was now dead.

"NOOOOOOOooOOO!!!! NOOOOOOOOOoooOoOoOOOOOOOooOOOOOOO!! NOOOOOOO!!!!!" She dug her face into the bloody mud, she had lost the most important thing to her. Pizza stood there looking at Freya, unsure what to say. There baby was now dead, and all because of a now dead Bandit. That Pizza was unable to protect his baby girl from.

But what pained Pizza further was that none of this would of happened if he had not taken on that strange quest he accepted from Lord Avon. His ocean side home that he built, his baby, Freya...

Freya threw mud at Pizza's face and screamed.
"I HATE YOU! I HATE YOU!!!!! I HATE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Before collapsing back into the mud crying her heart out.
Pizza stood still, he did not react, his blade coursed with more power then ever before, though.

Freya grabbed her babies body and held it as tight as she could.
"I'M SORRY!!!!! I'M SORRY! NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! Noo!!! nooooooooOO!
I'M SORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!
I'm so sorry! Please forgive me please." Her tears were lost to the rain.

The sun began to peer though the clouds, and the light danced across Freya.
Freya looked into her babies eyes, her uncontrollable crying suddenly ceased.
She smiled and slowly put her hand onto her babies head and caressed it.
She put her hand over her eyes and closed them. Before turning towards Pizza with an icy gaze.

That shot though his mind, and into his heart.

She bite her lip and ran away as fast as she could with their child's body.
Pizza stood still, defeated.

***

It was a starry night, and the moon was full, illuminating the landscape with it's beautiful glow.
Light danced across Freyas Javalin, that she had placed inside the earth next to her child's grave.
She had made a beautiful grave for her child;

She sat on her knees as she sang a beautiful song for them, she arranged beautiful flowers for them, and she prayed for them. She looked into the stars, asking for forgiveness, looking for answers.
She had none.

But she knew what she wanted to do.

She lifted her Javelin out of the earth and continued her travels to the east.
Unaware though, that Pizza was following her.

***

When Freya was far far away, Pizza visited the grave site she had made.
He took off his helmet and rested it onto the ground.
He stuck his blade where Freya's Javalin had been. The moon light shown brightly on it.

Pizza got down on his knees and began to cry, an act very unlike the Dark Knight, that he was.

He began to ponder how he was even a Dark Knight at all, since this is FFIX.
The paradox...
He tried to remember how it happened, but he could not, everything just blurred together.
He took off his left gauntlet and made a cut with his right on his left hand. He took his hand and placed it on the grave stone.

Pizza was unable to ask for forgiveness he could only offer his blood to his baby.

"Ah, so your baby is dead...?" Said a voice behind him, anger shot though Pizza and in his brilliant flash of confusion. He grabbed his sword, and swung at the voice behind him.

Cutting the grave stone in half. As well as missing. Pizza missed? Pizza was very confused.
"Lord Avon!?" Pizza was on the verge of striking at his body again. How did he miss?
He wanted to know what they were going to say now though. This was truly bizarre.

What is Lord Avon doing here? How does he know? Everything was happening so fast.
Was this just another illusion from the evil demon? Pizza could not tell.

"Have you found my accomplice yet? I don't beieve you have..." Pizza shook his head angrily.
"No I was unable to find them... and instead I have lost everything that I have ever managed to make for myself... everything."

Lord Avon laughed.

"My quest is not for just anyone Pizza. Do you think you can still find my accomplice?
I needed to find... a Dark Knight, such as yourself... Which is, very rare, in FFIX mmhmh."

Lord Avon snickered while running his hand threw his hair.
"Look...maybe I'll even toss in a 'Role Changer Stone' if you find my accomplice.
Perhaps it's all just another illusion, Pizza. Ask yourself, is your baby, dead?"

Role Changer Stone? What on earth was Lorn Avon talking about...
These things are not in Final Fantasy...Pizza could barely stand.
He closed his eyes and rubbed his brow in pain.
Was his baby alive? He could not let hope to enter his Dark Knight heart.

Pizza opened there eyes but to there confusion Lord Avon was now gone.
He looked around, and besides the now desecrated grave stone.
There was no sign of his presence ever have been there.

***

Blood covered Freya's body, she had not done a good job at hunting the Chocobos.
None the less, the bodies of 3 Chocobos surrounded her. She had cooked Chocobo Cacciatore.

Freya had never have heard of someone ever making such a meal.
But here she was, and it was done. She was happy that she at least made a nice meal.
But why three Chocobo's? What was the sense in that? Was there even the sense in one?
Tears filled Freya's eyes. Why do will kill things, and then ask for forgiveness after...

She ate the her meal though.
It was really good... But it did not bring her any closure, like she thought it would.

Her child was dead, and nothing was going to bring them back, and now so were three Chocobos.
So was a Bandit, but who gives a fuck? Freya heard movement in the Bushes. She grabbed her Javalin, she had began to act strangely aggressive over the past two weeks since her child died. She was ready for anything.

Pizza, emerged from the Bushes. Freya gasped.
She looked at the dead Chocobos and the blood on her arms.

She began to cry.


Here is a Persona 3 fanfic, it is NSFW(L?).
Igor x Kotone



"Welcome to the Velvet room! My name is Igor, I have a very large nose!"
Kotone felt kind of spaced out, was she dreaming? Igor's words kind of blurred into each other... He kept talking for awhile.

"I only ask that you abide by the contract. You must, touch my nose."
Suddenly Kotone felt awake.
"That's disgusting you old man. What kind of pervert are you? I'm out of here you sick fuck." Igor was taken back by her rudeness.

"H-how dare you! Y-you..." Igor's nose suddenly started to bleed profusely.
Kotone was laying on the floor with her clothes off.

"Oh Igor, please put that big nose of yours inside me." Kotone said lustfully spreading her legs open. Igor's nose wouldn't stop bleeding!
"O-oohh darn, ugh. Ahhhhh. oh!" Kotone giggled.

"Igor please I can't wait much longer."
Igor took off his pants. "W-well I guess I will just have t-to use this!"
Kotone nodded happily.

Igor's nose continued to bleed during the whole process.
Kotone was welcome back any time.



Xoe gives permission to be a part of any and all forms of fiction.
The possibilities are infinite.
Zakariya
Every misdeed has its own punishment, and every good deed has its reward.
1174
author=XoeisCooI
Xoe gives permission to be a part of any and all forms of fiction.
The possibilities are infinite.


Is there anyone you would like to be paired with? XD
Hmmmm how's about you? XD I shale make one at least :P
Marrend
Guardian of the Description Thread
21806
This ditty is a Persona 4 fan-fic done in the style of a Heartache 101 story-file with some alterations to be (hopefully) more easily understood by non-Heartache players. As an extra bonus (should one wish to call it that), I tried to stay true to Persona 4 in that the protagonist never has speaking lines, outside of dialog-choices.


STORY 1
PRIORITY = HIGH
PLACE = Iniba Station
ID = Chie
SHOW CENTER
NEUTRAL
Hey! <player>! Over here!
ID = --
Chie waves at you, and you wave back.
ID = Chie
Did you get Yosuke's message? They gave him another shift last-minute!
A: Ask about Yosuke/Teddie
B: Ask about Chie
C: Ask about Yukiko
D: Ask about Ryoutarou/Nanako

BRANCH A
# Asked about Yosuke/Teddie
ID = Chie
NEUTRAL
Teddie's gotten a bit better living on this side, I think.
UNFRIENDLY
They can both still be major pains-in-the-asses, though.
B: Ask about Chie
C: Ask about Yukiko
D: Ask about Ryoutarou/Nanako

BRANCH B
# Asked about Chie
ID = Chie
FRIENDLY
Me? I'll be starting college in a couple months. I'll probably major in Criminal Justice.
DETERMINED
I'm still looking to be a cop, <player>. I haven't given up on that.
# I could be incorrectly remembering on this point, but I'm pretty sure she mentions this somewhere in-game?
A: Ask about Yosuke/Teddie
C: Ask about Yukiko
D: Ask about Ryoutarou/Nanako

BRANCH C
# Asked about Yukiko. Stops conversation loop.
ID = Chie
WORRIED
The poor girl must have worked herself to the bone since we got wind that that you were coming back.
NEUTRAL
I'm sure you'll appreciate the results of her efforts, though!
FRIENDLY
Anyway, enough chit-chat! Let's go see her!
JUMP 2

BRANCH D
# Asked about Ryoutarou/Nanako
ID = Chie
MISCHIEVOUS
Gee, why ask me? Aren't they <b>your</b> family?
LIKE
Just kidding! They're doin' just fine from what I've heard! You're gonna visit them, too, right?
SURPRISED
I'm surprised you didn't ask them to put you up again! I'm sure they'd be okay with it. Unless...
MISCHIEVOUS
Say, <player> do you have <b>plans</b> that I don't know about involving Yukiko?
A: Ask about Yosuke/Teddie
B: Ask about Chie
C: Ask about Yukiko


STORY 2
CONDITION = 1 DONE
# We got here via a JUMP command in STORY 1, so, this condition isn't entirely necessary. Mostly, it's there for the sake of accuracy/completion.
PLACE = Amagi Inn
ID = Chie
SHOW LEFT
FRIENDLY
ID = Yukiko
SHOW RIGHT
NEUTRAL
Welcome to the... Amagi... Inn!?
ID = Chie
Hey yourself, Yukiko!
ID = Yukiko
SURPRISED
Al-already!? I-I mean...
NEUTRAL
Excuse me. Your reservation has been prepared. Please sign the register as I fetch your key.
ERASE RIGHT
ID = Chie
I think you can take it from here, <player>.
WORRIED
Just don't do anything incredibly stu...
NEUTRAL
Never mind. You're probably fine!
LIKE
Later!
ERASE LEFT
ID = --
A few more minutes pass
ID = Yukiko
SHOW CENTER
Have you signed the registry? Yes?
FRIENDLY
Good! Now, allow me to escort you to your room.
A: Please do.
B: I can find my own way.

BRANCH A
# Player allows Yukiko to escort him without any fuss.
ID = Yukiko
AFFECTION UP
Follow me, then.
JUMP C

BRANCH B
# Player initially disallows Yukiko to escort him.
ID = Yukiko
SAD
Are... you sure?
ID = --
There is an awkward pause between you.
ID = Yukiko
DETERMINED
Please, let me do this for you! I insist on it!
# She'll have none of it.
ID = --
You sense her determination, and respectfully agree.
JUMP C

BRANCH C
# Both paths lead to the same end, which is...
JUMP 3

STORY 3
CONDITION = 2 DONE
#... the next cut-scene!
PLACE = Amagi Inn - Room 151
ID = Yukiko
SHOW CENTER
FRIENDLY
Here we are! I hope everything is to your satisfaction?
ID = --
You start taking a look-around, then notice Yuikiko fidgeting.
ID = Yukiko
WORRIED
I'm sorry, <player>. I have to ask. Why is it that you decided to stay in the Inn? You have family here. Could you not have stayed with them? Don't tell me there was a falling out I'm not aware of!
A: (Courage) I wanted to be with you, not the Doujimas.
B: I'm being independent.

BRANCH A
ID = --
You get it into your head to tell her that you wanted to be with her, and not your family.
# This choice needs at least rating of 5 in Courage to succeed. Yes, I'm using Persona 4 stat-checks, not Heartache stat-checks!
C: COURAGE 5
# This is the "you failed the check" route.
ID = --
However, you lack the COURAGE to tell her this, and make up an excuse!
JUMP B
# This means that your "excuse" acts as if you responded with "I'm being independent."

BRANCH B
# Player told Yikiko that he/she (I'm mostly sure the Vita edition allows a female protagonist? No clue. Never played it, nor know much about it, save that it exists.) is being independent. Anyway, I imagine Yukiko is initially saddened by this...
ID = Yukiko
SAD
Independent, huh?
# Yukiko: You... didn't come to be with me? Still...
NEUTRAL
I can respect that.
# ... but ultimately respects this answer.
FRIENDLY
Well, enjoy your stay!
# It wouldn't make them any closer, though.
ID = --
You tell yourself that you will have other opportunities to talk with Yukiko before you have to leave again.

BRANCH C
# Player has the COURAGE to tell Yukiko that he/she is here for her!
ID = --
Your COURAGE is amazing! You were able to tell her without being flustered!
ID = Yukiko
SURPRISED
You're...!
LOVE
AFFECTION UP
You're not joking, are you? I'm honored, and deeply moved, by the thought!
ID = --
Yukiko embraces you warmly!
ID = --
You hold her tight, and kiss her on the forehead.
D: Yukiko LOVESICK
# It can be largely assumed that Yukiko is in a LOVESICK state because FANFIC.
# However, in the interest of being accurate with the Heartache story-template, we make the condition, and an appropriate fail-route.
ID = Yukiko
Hmmm. Say, <player>, what you've been up to? Tell me everything!
ID = --
You spend some quality time with Yukiko.
# The screen is not going black, people. There is nothing a extraordinary going on here.

BRANCH D
# Player had the COURAGE to tell Yukiko that he/she (I'm doing my absolute best to allow either scenario, here) came for her, and Yukiko is LOVESICK about player.
ID = Yukiko
Hmmmmmm! It's been too long! I love you, <player>! And so...
LOVESICK
...allow me to give you a special service. This kind of service I will do for no other.
ERASE CENTER
# I'm mostly sure this is not 100% necessary. We're going to JUMP into another story, and that should clear the graphics. However, what the hey!
JUMP 4

STORY 4
CONDITION = 3 DONE
PLACE = None
# This essentially puts us on a black screen. OH MY, WHAT ARE WE DOING, YUKIKO!?
ID = --
Your stay at the Amagi Inn continues.
# I'm trying to copy Persona 4's Christmas event here, and I could be getting the exact wording wrong.
# Oh well.
I liked your story Marrend!
I'd think someone would of left there family sooner though if they wanted independence...
Anyways you must let the game decide with a condition check.
Marrend
Guardian of the Description Thread
21806
Glad you liked it, Xoe! Perhaps the point of wanting to be independent was pure speculation on my part, though. At least as far as actually selecting that option, rather than failing to have enough COURAGE for the other option presented.
Zakariya
Every misdeed has its own punishment, and every good deed has its reward.
1174
author=XoeisCooI
Hmmmm how's about you? XD I shale make one at least :P

Perhaps a woman who can handle a horribly explosive temper. XP

Marrend may have an idea. XD


author=Marrend
This ditty is a Persona 4 fan-fic done in the style of a Heartache 101 story-file with some alterations to be (hopefully) more easily understood by non-Heartache players. As an extra bonus (should one wish to call it that), I tried to stay true to Persona 4 in that the protagonist never has speaking lines, outside of dialog-choices.


STORY 1
PRIORITY = HIGH
PLACE = Iniba Station
ID = Chie
SHOW CENTER
NEUTRAL
Hey! <player>! Over here!
ID = --
Chie waves at you, and you wave back.
ID = Chie
Did you get Yosuke's message? They gave him another shift last-minute!
A: Ask about Yosuke/Teddie
B: Ask about Chie
C: Ask about Yukiko
D: Ask about Ryoutarou/Nanako

BRANCH A
# Asked about Yosuke/Teddie
ID = Chie
NEUTRAL
Teddie's gotten a bit better living on this side, I think.
UNFRIENDLY
They can both still be major pains-in-the-asses, though.
B: Ask about Chie
C: Ask about Yukiko
D: Ask about Ryoutarou/Nanako

BRANCH B
# Asked about Chie
ID = Chie
FRIENDLY
Me? I'll be starting college in a couple months. I'll probably major in Criminal Justice.
DETERMINED
I'm still looking to be a cop, <player>. I haven't given up on that.
# I could be incorrectly remembering on this point, but I'm pretty sure she mentions this somewhere in-game?
A: Ask about Yosuke/Teddie
C: Ask about Yukiko
D: Ask about Ryoutarou/Nanako

BRANCH C
# Asked about Yukiko. Stops conversation loop.
ID = Chie
WORRIED
The poor girl must have worked herself to the bone since we got wind that that you were coming back.
NEUTRAL
I'm sure you'll appreciate the results of her efforts, though!
FRIENDLY
Anyway, enough chit-chat! Let's go see her!
JUMP 2

BRANCH D
# Asked about Ryoutarou/Nanako
ID = Chie
MISCHIEVOUS
Gee, why ask me? Aren't they <b>your</b> family?
LIKE
Just kidding! They're doin' just fine from what I've heard! You're gonna visit them, too, right?
SURPRISED
I'm surprised you didn't ask them to put you up again! I'm sure they'd be okay with it. Unless...
MISCHIEVOUS
Say, <player> do you have <b>plans</b> that I don't know about involving Yukiko?
A: Ask about Yosuke/Teddie
B: Ask about Chie
C: Ask about Yukiko


STORY 2
CONDITION = 1 DONE
# We got here via a JUMP command in STORY 1, so, this condition isn't entirely necessary. Mostly, it's there for the sake of accuracy/completion.
PLACE = Amagi Inn
ID = Chie
SHOW LEFT
FRIENDLY
ID = Yukiko
SHOW RIGHT
NEUTRAL
Welcome to the... Amagi... Inn!?
ID = Chie
Hey yourself, Yukiko!
ID = Yukiko
SURPRISED
Al-already!? I-I mean...
NEUTRAL
Excuse me. Your reservation has been prepared. Please sign the register as I fetch your key.
ERASE RIGHT
ID = Chie
I think you can take it from here, <player>.
WORRIED
Just don't do anything incredibly stu...
NEUTRAL
Never mind. You're probably fine!
LIKE
Later!
ERASE LEFT
ID = --
A few more minutes pass
ID = Yukiko
SHOW CENTER
Have you signed the registry? Yes?
FRIENDLY
Good! Now, allow me to escort you to your room.
A: Please do.
B: I can find my own way.

BRANCH A
# Player allows Yukiko to escort him without any fuss.
ID = Yukiko
AFFECTION UP
Follow me, then.
JUMP C

BRANCH B
# Player initially disallows Yukiko to escort him.
ID = Yukiko
SAD
Are... you sure?
ID = --
There is an awkward pause between you.
ID = Yukiko
DETERMINED
Please, let me do this for you! I insist on it!
# She'll have none of it.
ID = --
You sense her determination, and respectfully agree.
JUMP C

BRANCH C
# Both paths lead to the same end, which is...
JUMP 3

STORY 3
CONDITION = 2 DONE
#... the next cut-scene!
PLACE = Amagi Inn - Room 151
ID = Yukiko
SHOW CENTER
FRIENDLY
Here we are! I hope everything is to your satisfaction?
ID = --
You start taking a look-around, then notice Yuikiko fidgeting.
ID = Yukiko
WORRIED
I'm sorry, <player>. I have to ask. Why is it that you decided to stay in the Inn? You have family here. Could you not have stayed with them? Don't tell me there was a falling out I'm not aware of!
A: (Courage) I wanted to be with you, not the Doujimas.
B: I'm being independent.

BRANCH A
ID = --
You get it into your head to tell her that you wanted to be with her, and not your family.
# This choice needs at least rating of 5 in Courage to succeed. Yes, I'm using Persona 4 stat-checks, not Heartache stat-checks!
C: COURAGE 5
# This is the "you failed the check" route.
ID = --
However, you lack the COURAGE to tell her this, and make up an excuse!
JUMP B
# This means that your "excuse" acts as if you responded with "I'm being independent."

BRANCH B
# Player told Yikiko that he/she (I'm mostly sure the Vita edition allows a female protagonist? No clue. Never played it, nor know much about it, save that it exists.) is being independent. Anyway, I imagine Yukiko is initially saddened by this...
ID = Yukiko
SAD
Independent, huh?
# Yukiko: You... didn't come to be with me? Still...
NEUTRAL
I can respect that.
# ... but ultimately respects this answer.
FRIENDLY
Well, enjoy your stay!
# It wouldn't make them any closer, though.
ID = --
You tell yourself that you will have other opportunities to talk with Yukiko before you have to leave again.

BRANCH C
# Player has the COURAGE to tell Yukiko that he/she is here for her!
ID = --
Your COURAGE is amazing! You were able to tell her without being flustered!
ID = Yukiko
SURPRISED
You're...!
LOVE
AFFECTION UP
You're not joking, are you? I'm honored, and deeply moved, by the thought!
ID = --
Yukiko embraces you warmly!
ID = --
You hold her tight, and kiss her on the forehead.
D: Yukiko LOVESICK
# It can be largely assumed that Yukiko is in a LOVESICK state because FANFIC.
# However, in the interest of being accurate with the Heartache story-template, we make the condition, and an appropriate fail-route.
ID = Yukiko
Hmmm. Say, <player>, what you've been up to? Tell me everything!
ID = --
You spend some quality time with Yukiko.
# The screen is not going black, people. There is nothing a extraordinary going on here.

BRANCH D
# Player had the COURAGE to tell Yukiko that he/she (I'm doing my absolute best to allow either scenario, here) came for her, and Yukiko is LOVESICK about player.
ID = Yukiko
Hmmmmmm! It's been too long! I love you, <player>! And so...
LOVESICK
...allow me to give you a special service. This kind of service I will do for no other.
ERASE CENTER
# I'm mostly sure this is not 100% necessary. We're going to JUMP into another story, and that should clear the graphics. However, what the hey!
JUMP 4

STORY 4
CONDITION = 3 DONE
PLACE = None
# This essentially puts us on a black screen. OH MY, WHAT ARE WE DOING, YUKIKO!?
ID = --
Your stay at the Amagi Inn continues.
# I'm trying to copy Persona 4's Christmas event here, and I could be getting the exact wording wrong.
# Oh well.

For the most part, this was...interesting. XD

I don't know most of the characters that appeared in this story like the other ones you've made, so I don't know what to say about them.

I am sorry. ;_;
Well if Marrend has an idea.
Zakariya
Every misdeed has its own punishment, and every good deed has its reward.
1174
author=XoeisCooI
Well if Marrend has an idea.


Maybe. :P

What characters do you like the most? XD
Marrend
Guardian of the Description Thread
21806

author=Zakariya
author=XoeisCooI
Well if Marrend has an idea.
Maybe. :P


Only on Thursdays. Wait, what was that from before?

author=Zakariya
author=XoeisCooI
Hmmmm how's about you? XD I shale make one at least :P
Perhaps a woman who can handle a horribly explosive temper. XP

Marrend may have an idea. XD


Oh.

Yeah, I guess I kinda do.
Zakariya
Every misdeed has its own punishment, and every good deed has its reward.
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author=XoeisCooI
Well if Marrend has an idea.

author=Marrend
Wait, what was that from before?


Only Xoe knows. :P

author=Marrend
Oh.

Yeah, I guess I kinda do.


...does that mean what I think it does? XP
Marrend
Guardian of the Description Thread
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author=Zakariya
...does that mean what I think it does? XP


As of yet, the Bludgeon has not hit upon this. It has hit elsewhere.
Zakariya
Every misdeed has its own punishment, and every good deed has its reward.
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author=Marrend
As of yet, the Bludgeon has not hit upon this. It has hit elsewhere.

I don't think I want to join that. :P

I have numerous other things to work on. XP
Zakariya
Every misdeed has its own punishment, and every good deed has its reward.
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Here I'll share the written prequel to a story I'll include in content for a specific visual novel, although it may be subjected to numerous edits.

I'm not going to summarize the whole thing due to the fact that this post will be too long to read, so I'll mention the important stuff so you won't get confused.

This little entry features a young store manager who lives in a very poor nation that consists of numerous islands in the Atlantic Ocean.

Due to her country's condition, the youth have to emotionally mature into adults at very early ages, and must take on responsibilities adults would have. In Khalida's case, she has to run her family's store, while her parents take on various other tasks.

Because her island is dealing with a major problem in terms of illegal substances being traded all over the place, the police can't deal with anything other than extremely significant threats, and they don't consider the daughter of a very famous Pokemon Trainer (who is a character I didn't create, of course) to be a serious threat. They consider her a petty troll, at most.

In this short fanfic, Khalida has a relatively lax morning until she encounters a very undesired visitor.

As with the other story I posted in this thread, Lia isn't nice here either. Read at your own risk.


The past few hours had been unusually peaceful for Khalida while the morning came about, as the relatively mild heat began to seep into the air. The unusual lack of stress was pleasant enough for Khalida to tolerate the blatant decay of her store, and for once she wasn't worried about the customers ridiculing its condition.

Just as Khalida opened the door, the store manager saw something that instantly infuriated her. The large promotional poster of Kaza Sei had been impaled by a combat machete, and the number of the beast had been carved into the walls in several places.

Numerous objects had been knocked off of the shelves along with emptied boxes, and burnt toilet paper rolls were put in their places. The store manager already knew who raided her business, and started to feel the hatred that everyone else felt towards the said culprit.

Khalida sighed at the police not having the time nor the resources needed to deal with situations like this, and was now regretting the fact that she didn't invest in a security setup in spite of the financial strain.

"Care to explain what this is about, Lia?" Khalida growled, flipping the light switch as she heard something rustling in the corners.

"You people aren't dumbasses, that's for sure...!" Lia said resentfully, shoving aside the table she was hiding under. "Alright Miss Mehmud...Mahhumeh-"

"For the seventh time...my name is Khalida Mahmoud," she told the unethical girl patiently, putting her hands on her hips. "Now, tell me what this is about and maybe we can make an agreement to end this before it continues?"

"Ha! Give up on having fun?!" Lia mocked, pulling the machete out of the Kaza Sei poster. "The cops are too busy, and you don't have the money to sue my parents! And even if you could punish me, where's the sense in throwing away the honor of having me in your store?"

Just because you're the daughter of an important public figure doesn't mean you are actually as great as you claim to be, Khalida thought resentfully. Nor does it justify any of this.

"Get out of my store," Khalida ordered firmly, pointing to the door. "I don't care if the rumors of your bad childhood experiences are true or not, you don't have the right to do these things-"

"Yes I do," Lia interrupted with a fearsome tone, just as a horrifying look in her eyes formed. "Even in a country like this, you all have good lives compared to what I used to have."

Lia marched out of the store as she muttered numerous insults under her breath, and shoved a potential customer to the ground before he could enter.

Though the store manager couldn't see the young man in detail due to the mess on the windows, she could tell that he was almost completely covered in a black garb of sorts.

"Alright you rude prick, you want a piece of..." he tried to say, before realizing who attempted to physically harm him. "...Lia?"

"You finally left that desert, huh?" she asked rhetorically, sounding increasingly angry. "Move aside, twat! I don't feel like chasing you around today."

"Where did you get that generic outfit...?" he asked quietly, sounding worried.

Khalida felt the urge to peek outside of the door, although she wasn't willing to risk motivating Lia to enter the store once again.

"Khalida's worthless pet ate my clothes," Lia replied with an amused tone, her voice lacking any trace of the previous anger she was feeling. "So, I took this from that girl with the really big vocabulary when she visited here. That one everyone says you're-"

"Quiet! I'm not into that, and..." he hissed, pulling out what seemed to be a phone. "I just happened to be recording this little chat. I hope you don't mind me telling your mom about all of this, I'm sure she'll appreciate it..."

"I'm definitely going to beat the shit out of you if that happens!" Lia shouted, throwing aside the machete she took.

Instead of giving the deplorable girl a vocal reaction, the young male simply sprinted in the adjacent direction, forcing Lia to go on a chase that was blatantly hopeless on her end due to the inferior running speed.

Khalida looked at the cash register in complete sadness, feeling horrendous guilt over not being able to due anything to discontinue Lia's madness.

The store manager looked at the picture of her close friend she kept on her desk, the same friend she secretly felt a great amount of affection towards.

Mazin wonders why I keep declining every time he asks me out, she thought remorsefully. If I can't even keep my store and the customers safe from some crazy foreigner, how am I going to be a good girlfriend for him? He's not going to be happy with someone who can't handle her responsibilities.

Khalida closed her eyes tightly, and began to pray for a miracle to arrive soon. The nightmare had gone on for long enough, and there was no reason why Lia's nonsense had to continue.

While it didn't seem likely in the present, Khalida had a faint feeling that someone or something would spare them eventually. But at the current time, they had to endure the undeserved punishment.
Hexatona
JESEUS MIMLLION SPOLERS
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Welp, I'm bored - DuckDuckGo: roll 2d20

5 6

Heh heh heh

Genis and... hmm... Flonne or Etna.. Let's punish Genis with Etna.
YESU gogo hezxatana