THE SCREENSHOT TOPIC RETURNS

Or then it's the fucking miracles or magic.

h0nk :o)

Good music. Dialogue does not make sense. I don't know who's talking or what they're talking about. I'm fine with dialogue being somewhat mysterious, but when it's like this it might as well not even exist.

Also why does a person appear out of nowhere in the middle of the scene? Are those supposed to be stairs from the basement and he or she came up the stairs into the room in the middle of the telepathic conversation between two or more people who don't exist who may or may not be the same person? Was he just invisible until then, and he's one of the people talking? I'm so confused.

Thank you all for your feedback and interest! I've been in University all day so its taken a while for me to get a chance to write back.

@Deacon: Yes it is RPG Maker 2k3, the only things I ripped were the sprites and a few pics used in the menus. Most of the Menus and Background Maps were drawn by me. The trees particularly were not ripped but made in 3d software.

@Felipe: Thank you very much, it is actually an RPG Maker game! Also I really like the atmosphere and feel from your new video. It has an air of chaos to it that is further enhanced by the ambiance from the music and lighting.

@Lockez: You are correct in that the screens are from RM, however none of what you see is concept. All screens were taken from in-game and everything you see has been 100% completed. The Shop Menu, Battle System, Harvesting System, Lock Picking System, Mining, and Fishing, along with the Desktop GUI have either been roughly 80% to 100% completed. You cannot see the Desktop GUI, Harvesting, or Lock Picking in these screens but I have submitted my game to the Main Page of RMN if anyone is interested in seeing more of this game in action. There is an old and I'd say outdated video up...the battle system has been enhanced since then along with other aspects of the game but if anyone wants to get an idea the link is:
http://rpgmaker.net/games/3598/

@Lotus_Games: Wow, I'm surprised you were able to get the artwork looking that good in RM2K3. Very nice.

@chana: I definitely agree that front-loading the player with explanations is not necessary or good to do. I just wonder what the value is of a two minute long dialogue in which the player can understand nothing.

I understand the son has committed a crime and his father (conscience) does not agree ?
@Felipe : the english needs serious revising though.

@Felipe:ok, there aren't that many (an impression) :

a(product of my mind)
(what) have I (not :I have)(done)
(I don't know what) you are (not :are you)(talking about).

@Felipe :oh! (for the story), it is difficult to understand who's talking, you could differentiate the speakers, or through the dialogue itself, or by varying the size or whatever of the font, for example, names might take some of the mystery out?

I'm sure there's a problem within the dialogue that makes it contradictory, it's difficult to point out just with the video. The "mysterious voice" bit would work (though not too original!), and how much would it erase the inner problem, if you see what I mean? well..

What do you mean??? IF i am using a script for the dialogue box??? yes, i am using a letter-by-letter script.