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i rarely hear any harmonies in your music and the few that i do hear are trivial. your melodies sound illogical and choppy and unemotive and generally lack meaningful structure

i feel about your music the same that i did like a year ago. the only aspect that seems to have improved is the mixing of the tracks

Thanks for commenting! I can see where the "choppy and unemotive" are coming from as I agree with that in some cases. I wouldn't go as far as to say there are no harmonies in my music or that they're all trivial. I do agree that there's lot of room for improving my harmonies, however. What comes to logicality of my melodies, I feel that this is partly subjective. I do like some of my melodies a lot, and know other people who do too, but there are some songs where they aren't that good, though, and can probably be viewed as unlogical or unmeaningful if they don't create any emotion or atmosphere. Atmosphere is the main purpose of my works, after all.

Though I would appreciate if you commented specific pieces instead than my work in general. I am aware there's always room for much improvement and I am striving to improve on every area (those which you pointed out, too) but it would be more helpful if you pointed out what is wrong with a specific song, because I find it unlikely that the same problems are plaguing every piece.

Glad to hear the mixing of songs sounds better than earlier, though! I find it hard to believe that I haven't improved in anything else, though, but I'll try to pay even more attention to my intervals in my next songs, both melodic and harmonic.