Oh…so that’s what this update was all about! I was initially caught off guard when I first saw this in my notices and on the latest download section and thought for a moment that “Heeeyyy…I wonder what this is??? Maybe some new additional content or something???” But my hopes were then suddenly dashed and all that when it ended up being just a minor dialogue fix, you tease, you!
I personally never had any problems with the Cinnamon scene beforehand (although it has been a while since I last played this game). But, looking over at the new dialogue and all, I think you made the right choice to clean it up a bit. It still maintains the original shock factor about Sissy finding out about Cinnamon without it seeming insulting. Good job!