Hello!
Looks amazing! The only thing i want to add is, that there should be a black screen or another indicator that he fell asleep... at least if he didn't refer to sleeping before. I am not entirely sure from this clip if he slept because of the elven magic or if he meant the little "nap" he had before.
Anyways very nice. Have a good one.
I will keep sitting on the discord to see how this turns out.
Have a good day.