I agree, I like wordy sentences when it fits the characters personality. It makes that character more distinct in my opinion. It also makes what they have to say sound more like its coming from them and not just words in a script spoken by actors. ( I hope that makes sense =P)
While I am posting, I would also like to say how much I like this map. The atmosphere is very dark and dreary but yet I can still see everything crystal clear and with rich color. I dislike when people make the mistake of trying to make things dark but take it to the degree of making the player unable to identify things easily.