Mana Conquest

Well, I did say I would test it, so you can use my comments as a guide when you do fix it up. I stopped before taking the test, because it's kind of late, but I'll copy and paste everything I have so far. It was mostly just grammar bugs, but there were alot.

Mana conquest bugs.

Not all of these are bugs, some are merely opinions of my own, but they will be included here, because I personally believe they can be changed to make the game more realistic. This is the way I test all my games, and since I believe this game has alot of potential to be improved, I'll give this game the degree of testing it should of received a long time ago!

1. In the intro, there is a typo. cheif should be chief
2. Also in the intro, never start a sentance with the word And. I think quite a bit of the dialog should be rewritten personally, but since it's a completed game, I'll just give you the errors I find.
3. When you try to rest right as the game starts, the game fades out acting like you did sleep, but then your character says he can't go to sleep now. It's a contradiction.
4. Still in the very first map of the game, one of the books says: spelink for dumeys. I'm not certain if spelink was meant to be spelunk, but I know for certain dumeys is spelt wrong. It's meant to be dummies.
5. You go downstairs, and despite someone yelling upstairs to wake him up, there is nobody downstairs. I don't know how it is there, but generally people usually stick around to make sure your up, and then leave.
6. Fish is not a breakfast food, you'd be better off giving him an apple or something.
7. I'm on the second map, talking to Melissa, never start a sentence with but either. Not trying to be big on grammar, but so many mistakes will turn people off. It also tends to look better.
8. Be sure to use don't correctly. Don't = do not. It's misused once so far while still talking to melissa in the 2nd map.
9. When speaking to melissa's mother, the last part didn't have a period at the end.
10. Why would melissa give you a herb for not going through her things? Your headed out to slay a monster, she should be sharing her herbs regardless.
11. On some maps, theres dirt terrain marking your way to the next map, and on others it seems it doesn't matter (when moving through maps in the village going left/right, and vise versa.
12. You're is misused in a sentence, and I assume wards is meant to be words.
13. Theo says: you have the nerve to ask what, I assume what is meant to be that.
14. How did theo know that rolf was the son of his enemy? I don't recall anybody revealing that information to him. Smelling his taint doesn't really seem to be a good answer to that.
15. I'm in the second town, and there is an npc who can walk on the houses opening. It's two tiles high, and she can walk on both. This is on the map to the left of the doctors office.
16. when rolf is talking to the doctor (the scene at night), my father once told me is not a complete sentence.
17. even though he didnt get sleep, shouldn't he of been healed after those scenes? Well, the inn is cheap, so I don't mind either way.

Quick edit: Forgot to mention that mapping errors will not be posted here, as while I think your mapping could use a bit of work, I'm going to leave it up to you on whether to do that. Right now it's tolerable.

how do you exit that prestess place i went in to get the girl but now i cant get out it were the monks are and the high presstess is*p.s mighta spellt some words wrong*

That fixed it. Not sure why it wasn't working before lol. Well from what I remember, the intro of your game was good, can't comment much on the rest since the quiz stopped me back then. I'm dangerous at testing, so I'll help ya fix it up with my comments as I go through.

I tried to play this awhile back, but I couldn't get one of the questions in the hero naming part of the quiz to work. I'll see about giving this another shot, but you really should fix it up a bit. People are bound to want to play the games in order, so you want to fix this up before releasing the sequel. Of course it's up to you, it's just my advice.

Edit: I was going to give it another shot, but there is no font in the game folder, and the font isn't working. When I tried it last time, I had a different computer than I do now, and I know for sure that it can't be any of the default rm2k3 fonts, cause those are already on my computer.

whats the awsers for the 8 questions in the castle i stuck.

Ah, thanks then.

I think we may be talking about different dungeons? Because I tried that but I couldn't get past the spikes.

I'm stuck in the cave where you get the strength bracelet. Specifically, I'm stuck around the area where you fight that one guy; after the room where I fight the soldiers there's some spikes, but I can't figure where the button to get rid of them is. A little help?

Man you game rocks as classci epic rpg. Great voice work and everything else. Well maybe lack of accesories pissed me a bit but that s all. The ending was pwning hahaha.I think only one more game I completed had more anticlimatic ending- PARALLEL WORLDS inspired by Year 1984 Orwell. Where after many adventures hero waltz into tyrant hq when he is stopped by his team cuz they were working all along for tyrant and the hero gets killed. Unfortunatelly game is not translated( polish)