How you can fix that is to resize the title so it fits in the window, make the wings a slightly less bright and less saturated, even kinda transparent if you want. It's a good idea to define "Hero I" by making the outline thicker. I can see there's a bit of grey there and it does its job on a white background but not on this one.

Other things you can try out is making the subtitle smaller, moving it around so it doesn't cover up the H, or if they really must overlap, have the H covering it up instead?

The { isn't symmetrical to the }.

Moving the whole "Hero I" a bit to the left would be a good idea because there's too little space between I and } but there's a lot of space between { and H. If you're hesitant to do so because of the the twirly lines, lemme tell you: they don't matter. Because you don't really want someone to look at the title and think "My gawd that H is twirly", you want them to think "This game is Hero I"

Yup. Font's too fancy and will give hard time to read.