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Watching the aquarium.
  • SnowOwl
  • Added: 01/23/2011 12:15 AM
  • Last updated: 07/09/2020 12:57 AM
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InfectionFiles
the world ends in whatever my makerscore currently is
4353
I love this.
very well done imo
tardis
is it too late for ironhide facepalm
285
you've got a perspective inconsistency on that glowing green thing.
tardis
you've got a perspective inconsistency on that glowing green thing.
You are quite right, i'll fix that asap.
InfectionFiles
the world ends in whatever my makerscore currently is
4353
author=SnowOwl
tardis
you've got a perspective inconsistency on that glowing green thing.
You are quite right, i'll fix that asap.

yeah, that's the only thing that really threw me in the first place about this screen
what is it supposed to be?

oh, and tardis, CONSISTENCY POLICE
-Hawaii 5-O theme plays-
not sure if this has been edited, but if you imagine that last bend in the pipe is coming towards the screen it can make sense. the simplest fix is to move it, but with a little imagination it works :3
Creation
An avid lover of Heartache 101
1446
1. The reflection of the glass isn't very well done and clashes with the jellyfish on the left hand side.

2. Like tardis said, big perspective problem with the green tank on the floor.

3. the fish looks like it's on the other side of the window pane, right where the character is. Try to make sure that everything looks like its behind the window because now it's a bit disturbing.

4. There's something off about the tentacles of that thing on the right. Just compare the top half with the bottom half and you'll see what I mean (that's nitpicking though although this is what got my attention at first).

5. The floor looks nice but the lighting is off. I'd be great it you could reflect the light from the aquarium on the floor like so:



It would create a great ambiance.
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