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Looking for Chapter 4 Proofreaders

The rather long fourth chapter of The World Is Made of Paper is finally finished. To keep the proofreading workload, and my own need for editing, under control, I figure it's probably best to handle it chapter by chapter, rather than all at once.

Chapter four begins where the demo left off, so anyone who played through the demo should have no trouble understanding what's going on. It also works fully in-game, so you'll also get to see it in action, if you so choose.

All help will be given credit, of course, and drawing from me as a small repayment. Thank you in advance.

Also, thank you everyone who nominated the game for Misaos! It's really encouraging to see even just the simple nominations for it!

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All help will be given credit, of course, and drawing from me as a small repayment.


What is the nature of this drawing payment? :D I didn't play any of this before but I don't mind not knowing what's going on. It's just proofreading after all.
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What is the nature of this drawing payment? :D I didn't play any of this before but I don't mind not knowing what's going on. It's just proofreading after all.


Probably a full body, colored character portrait. I guess not knowing what's happening might be fine. XD If nothing else, it might be interesting to see what someone who hasn't seen the rest thinks of the chapter.

also holy crap what happened to the background and logo why are they dead no come back
Do I get to determine anything about the drawing? :P Not that it's important or necessary. Send me the chapter and I'll get started.

CSS meltdown? I see the logo but no bg.
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Do I get to determine anything about the drawing? :P Not that it's important or necessary. Send me the chapter and I'll get started.

CSS meltdown? I see the logo but no bg.


Of course. Anything you want, really. XD As long as you don't ask me to draw any complicated backgrounds, I'll probably be fine with it.

Yeah, I fixed the logo, and I'm just going to have to put the background back up tomorrow. It refuses to work today. Ah well.

Anyways, I'll send you everything in just an hour or so. I just need to put some finishing touches on thing, and complete one last scene.
Nah, I'm not worried about a background. You can do it without one at all. But what to make the character look like?...hmm Does it have to be a character from your game or any character at all? :P Just want to understand the boundaries of this before I decide.

I'm about *edit*1/2 through the script so far. It's a great read, some minor errors so far. Should be done by the end of the day, if not, tomorrow.
Any character at all, and no rush. I'm glad you're enjoying it. Out of curiosity, where are you marking down the errors?
Sweet, I was thinking maybe my Mithra as Puppetmaster with Soulsoother automaton or as Dark Knight from FFxi. In those particular armors(the one with red sleeves, not the stupid orange one the Stigmar character has on). I dunno if either of those would be too complex, but I love getting drawings of Xelda :3 1 2 3 Some references for the hairstyle and such. I have really fond memories of that game. Any kind of pose/armor would be nice, though.

Or maybe something to do with Link.

The rush wasn't even for your benefit :P it's because I was getting sucked into the story. I really wanted to keep going. I don't read stories often, but every once and a while I find a good one and I can't seem to put it away. You've got me hooked. I'd be happy to proofread every other chapter ^.^
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