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Another Paine art from me. It's been a while since I sketched them together.
  • polarcactus
  • Added: 06/23/2012 02:17 PM
  • Last updated: 01/30/2023 08:48 PM


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Nicely drawn, and cute picture :)
The sword strap is directly on her left boob when it should be between.
Don't think less of me for pointing such a thing out ._.
I really like Laine's expression on this drawing, she looks really strong and confident. Her posture adds to this as well since that awkward leaning forward from previous drawings is gone. There are still a couple of things that strike me as odd, though. Laine's waist/hips look like she's wearing a very tight corset. And Patrick's arm seems to be too long since his elbow is drawn below his waist... =P
You've improved! I can see you studied the hair of Luciana, it looks very similar to the original art xD (note: this is a compliment)
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