Ahem! I really like this drawing. For the most part anyway. - The coloring is definitively my favorite, with all its intricate details, hightlits, textures, etc. The drawing itself is also very good... except for the face. You seem to draw faces way too roundish; Almost cartoonish. If I were you I would define her facial features a bit more to give her a more mature/natural look, more in-tune with the rest of the drawing.