I like the first one colour-wise, I was assuming it was dawn actually, given I think that is a guy by the side of the inn taking a leak on that bollard, which tends only to happen at the end of a long night of drinking.
Also, why does the signpost have a speech bubble above it? Is that an indicator that it can be read?
Edit: Also I think the problem with the roof is that gable roof lines tend to be lower than the main ridge or equal to it, yours looks like it's taller