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A cute little enemy loosely based on the much-less-cute octopus stinkhorn
  • Melkino
  • Added: 03/09/2016 12:49 AM
  • Last updated: 04/24/2024 07:39 PM
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Craze
why would i heal when i could equip a morningstar
15170
03/09/2016 01:11 AM
That thing looks spoopy as all heck.

The first sentence in the description is a bit odd though, with its "...that...which..." structure -- idk, something about going on about the object some more bothers me. that's 600% a personal nitpick though so take it or leave it ;V
Liberty
RTP Princess
24266
03/09/2016 01:45 AM
"This plantlike creature secretes a black sap to attract and paralyze its prey. It then uses it's spiked arms to tear its meal apart."

Melkino
solos collectors on purpose
2021
03/09/2016 02:04 AM
author=Craze
That thing looks spoopy as all heck.

The first sentence in the description is a bit odd though, with its "...that...which..." structure -- idk, something about going on about the object some more bothers me. that's 600% a personal nitpick though so take it or leave it ;V

Yeah, I wasn't sure either. I looked around for rules concerning that vs. which and mostly found conflicting information...

author=Liberty
"This plantlike creature secretes a black sap to attract and paralyze its prey. It then uses it's spiked arms to tear its meal apart."

I think I'll go with something along the lines of that, thanks! :)

edit: updated screenshot with new text
orochii
6740
03/09/2016 01:41 PM
But... but... octopus are cute ;-;. Much level of cuteness.
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