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One day at work changes one man's life when he is defending important supplies, an attack is launched and he backs down when he is told his family has been kidnapped after then reporting back to the platoon he is arrested for treason and sent to prison a daring escape and a huge conspiracy unfolds as you attempt to get answers to why these thing's happened to you.

currently in development and is completely lacking in NPC's and the like but will be updated as soon as possible.

this is planned to be a 4 part game and get up to a 25-30 hour + game.

Game will include:
Item forging
a huge story line
Possibly more ask for them in comments

currently has:
a Prison escape
2 forge-able items (Forged Potion, Forged High Potion)
Planned forging (Forged Gun blade (currently there is a plain gun blade that you get), Forged Armor sets (possibly twice as powerful as other Armors).)

Plot line:

You are a soldier named Gerald Hill (the full name's aren't used much but i'm putting them here anyway.), and have just been given your orders straight from the king, this important as it's your first mission as a soldier, you are told to expect an attack from the resistance and what do you know they come around and knock kindly and tell you that your family has been kidnapped you give in and let them have what's in this important weapon cache and manage to get away.

After reporting back you are taking into custody and put on trial for conspiring against the king and sentenced to 10 years in jail.

This is where you meet your second party member Fabio Green a guard who you talk to and after 3 years he decides to help you break free it's a daring escape and Fabio has organized the Resistance to help you's out.

After meeting with the resistance you realize the real reason you were assigned to guard duty of the mostly cleared weapon cache and find how much the world has plunged into darkness.

(currently i'm not going to discuss more.)

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I made my own site

So i kinda forgot about having this after my computer got wiped and only managed to find it today and in the time since then have made my own website for my game though i now plan to keep it as just 1 long game and have it in the BETA phase until i finish it this gives a few bonuses

1. I will be likely to release beta's monthly (possibly more often)
2. All this will be stored in a place where as you can see from the site is in many areas (Character bios and the such)
3.it will mean that the beta's are simply strung together

The Plan is the game will be beta until full completion and then i will move onto ALPHA this will involve me creating the game fully from scratch (the Beta is more for story line purpose)

So the website is https://sites.google.com/site/imminentfrontier/
feel free to visit and put down your thoughts as this will be purely maintained by me.
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  • wazzatron
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yay it was finally accepted OK updates about the game will be posted here constantly and any criticisms are greatly appreciated, DO NOT HOLD BACK.

OK first order of business i plan to have a beta out for everyone to play ASAP though due to school and impending exams it may be a bit slower than i would like :(

I'm hoping to have the (very first) beta out at the 6/10/2011 at around 8pm Australian Eastern Daylight Savings Time

Just so everyone knows there is a short Download beta available on site though only about 30 mins game play at this point and about a third of this is story but it's still a work in progress.
Ratty524
The 524 is for 524 Stone Crabs
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author=wazzatron
Possibly more ask for them in comments
... What? I don't really understand this feature. You want to put more "ask for them" in comments? Could you clarify this?

author=wazzatron
You are a soldier named Gerald Hill (the full name's aren't used much but i'm putting them here anyway.), and have just been given your orders straight from the king, this important as it's your first mission as a soldier, you are told to expect an attack from the resistance and what do you know they come around and knock kindly and tell you that your family has been kidnapped you give in and let them have what's in this important weapon cache and manage to get away.

After reporting back you are taking into custody and put on trial for conspiring against the king and sentenced to 10 years in jail.

This is where you meet your second party member Fabio Green a guard who you talk to and after 3 years he decides to help you break free it's a daring escape and Fabio has organized the Resistance to help you's out.

After meeting with the resistance you realize the real reason you were assigned to guard duty of the mostly cleared weapon cache and find how much the world has plunged into darkness.
What... What... WHAT!?
The grammar of your synopsis is so terrible that I can barely understand what is going on. So you are a soldier... I got that, then you "have just been given your orders straight from the king, this important as it's your first mission as a soldier, you are told to expect an attack from the resistance." This sentence is a run-on, and because it's stating two different thoughts, it should be two sentences.

So... My first mission as a soldier is to report to the king? King of what? Who is "the resistance"? What world is this supposed to be set in?

"what do you know they come around and knock kindly and tell you that your family has been kidnapped you give in and let them have what's in this important weapon cache and manage to get away." - This sentence boggles my mind. I'm sorry, but I don't understand what you are trying to say. Does the resistance tell you about your family getting kidnapped once the soldier is trying to kill them? What is this "important weapon cache"? You did not properly set up your story at all. You kind of need to ask who, what, where, when, and why when you are trying to tell us a story. Reading the bulk of your synopsis was absolutely confusing.
first yes i mean put a comment in saying i want to see some of this i can tailor a game pretty easily to include some sort of system if it is really wanted.

secondly:

You are a soldier named Gerald Hill (the full name's aren't used much but i'm putting them here anyway.) that has just graduated, and have just been given your first ever mission orders straight from the king, this is important as it's your first mission as a soldier. You are told to expect an attack from the resistance, and what do you know they come around and knock kindly and tell you that your family has been kidnapped by them, you give in and let them have what's in this important weapon cache and you manage to get away.
author=wazzatron
first yes i mean put a comment in saying i want to see some of this i can tailor a game pretty easily to include some sort of system if it is really wanted.


I would like the player to fight the king in outer space, riding a super nova. do this pls.

kthnx.
Ratty524
The 524 is for 524 Stone Crabs
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author=Radnen
I would like the player to fight the king in outer space, riding a super nova. do this pls.

kthnx.

God dammit I wish there was a "like" button for posts.
author=Radnen
author=wazzatron
first yes i mean put a comment in saying i want to see some of this i can tailor a game pretty easily to include some sort of system if it is really wanted.
I would like the player to fight the king in outer space, riding a super nova. do this pls.

kthnx.

that may be possible the in space part at least, how exactly do you ride a super nova.
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