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  • jomarcentermjm
  • Added: 04/27/2012 10:42 AM
  • Last updated: 04/19/2024 07:01 PM
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Bwahahaha!!!! That is all. B3~
Haha you should be. Way outta BlackMoon Prophecy territory. Into Jomar land where heshe its roam free due to advaced technology. Keep up the good but scary work jomar!
I'm feeling a little scared now.
author=KaRNoFeRoZ
author=jomarcenter
author=UPRC
Well that boy looks incredibly feminine then.
well it year 3XXX. what technology can they accomplished...
You mean that's a shemale?
you can called it that.
at least the technology wasn't create by sci-lab 5 (please refer to next game called "lifeless" for more info)
This game is so advanced. Thats insane! A heshe on the loose!!!!!
author=jomarcenter
author=UPRC
Well that boy looks incredibly feminine then.
well it year 3XXX. what technology can they accomplished...


You mean that's a shemale?
author=bigtime
Jomar did you get my PM with dialogue?
yes i received it and use it as a reference.

author=UPRC
Well that boy looks incredibly feminine then.
well it year 3XXX. what technology can they accomplished...
Jomar did you get my PM with dialogue?
Well that boy looks incredibly feminine then.
author=UPRC
I would recommend changing that line to the following.

"You idiot! You don't know what you're doing!"

It should definitely be "you're" rather than "your" because your is possessive (your cat, your best friend, etc.) while you're is descriptive (you are fat, you are doomed). The rest is okay I suppose, but only if the girl is supposed to be talking like an emotionless robot.
you think he a she...
recheck that girl is a boy!!!
I would recommend changing that line to the following.

"You idiot! You don't know what you're doing!"

It should definitely be "you're" rather than "your" because your is possessive (your cat, your best friend, etc.) while you're is descriptive (you are fat, you are doomed). The rest is okay I suppose, but only if the girl is supposed to be talking like an emotionless robot.
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