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A change meeting?
  • Marrend
  • Added: 10/08/2012 03:03 PM
  • Last updated: 03/28/2024 10:19 AM
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BurningTyger
Hm i Wonder if i can pul somethi goff here/
1289
I think i can spruce up that dialogue a bit; why not send me what you have?
chana
(Socrates would certainly not contadict me!)
1584
Right, "In any event, I fear" doesn't sound great, maybe just : "I must attend to something...", just trying to help, i could be completely off. In any case, nice map, that red on the dark grey, also I love the sprites.
BurningTyger
Hm i Wonder if i can pul somethi goff here/
1289
I feel she's too brusque honestly. I have the general script used there, but not all the new rooms. SO i could do a bit of work myself, but it might not be complete.
Marrend
Guardian of the Description Thread
21781
The latest version of the game, at least on my end, reworks this scene. I'm hoping the dialog flows better, but I'm going to have BurningTyger take a look at it.
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