• Add Review
  • Subscribe
  • Nominate
  • Submit Media
  • RSS
The news office - a place to rest and review case files.
  • Marrend
  • Added: 12/31/2012 05:15 PM
  • Last updated: 04/20/2024 05:40 AM
  • 3005 views

Posts

Pages: 1
Wyvernjack
33
02/21/2013 02:38 PM
What's with the random oven?
Marrend
Guardian of the Description Thread
21781
02/21/2013 05:09 PM
I think I wanted some kind of heating unit there. Or, more probably, just have something there.
Marrend
Guardian of the Description Thread
21781
05/03/2013 06:16 PM
Image updated! Outside of not yet having a name for this newspaper that Shizu is supposed to work for (that seems a rather minor technicality at this point), how's this for an office?
Mr_Detective
60
05/03/2013 08:37 PM
The map on the top right needs to be fixed. If the only ones who work for Shizu are Masanori and Nanami, then you should cut back the number of desks. :P

And what's going on with all the random boxes on the top? :O
Marrend
Guardian of the Description Thread
21781
05/03/2013 09:33 PM
The main idea was that players would formulate the party, and have free resting, here. Saying that, I could probably cut down the space to just four desks. As for the boxes, I guess that room felt a little too empty, and I wanted to compensate. I can see cutting off some space in that room since that seems to bother us both.

Side note - Shizu, Masanori, and Nanami are co-workers with this iteration. Shizu isn't the boss. Though, if I make her the boss, maybe I can somehow finagle her name into the newspaper? Which would give me my new game title. Hrm...
Marrend
Guardian of the Description Thread
21781
05/21/2013 05:52 PM
Image updated! Outside of the editor's room, I'm feeling pretty good about this!
Mr_Detective
60
05/21/2013 06:43 PM
I think the chairs should be facing the laptops. The phones should be beside the laptops, and the papers should be below the phones. That might look better, I believe. :P
Marrend
Guardian of the Description Thread
21781
05/22/2013 12:49 PM
You're right about the chairs, with how this map is set up. They didn't quite look right to me in the "up" position, but since I don't exactly have different facings for the 'puters...

Image updated!
Pages: 1