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Welcome to the world of a group of young protagonists. Your main character is a girl named, Sakura. She lives in Shugo Village with her twin brother, Steve. Sakura is not the type of girl who gets involved in anything. She wants to live the life of an ordinary girl, as any other ordinary people. Although that doesn't mean she dislikes adventuring. She loves to go to different villages and etc. Steve on the other hand wants Sakura to be a somebody and not just a nobody. So he enters a competition with Sakura as a Swordsman. Atleast until new villagers arrive to live in Shugo Town and throws them off track.

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This is a commercial game? Really?
author=Clyve
This is a commercial game? Really?


My very first thought.
Ratty524
The 524 is for 524 Stone Crabs
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author=Clyve
This is a commercial game? Really?

lol wut?

The characters just crack me up. You have a girl with a Japanese name paired with a boy who has probably the worst English name you could give to someone. Oh and I believe that anyone/anything who is named "Steve" is to be despised, to explain my logic.
What are you guys talking about...? It doesn't say commercial anywhere.

author=Ratty
You have a girl with a Japanese name paired with a boy who has probably the worst English name you could give to someone.


Maybe he was trying to use ordinary, realistic names ? :P
kentona
only 90s kids will like this admin
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It used to be marked as a Commercial game yesterday. It isn't anymore.
Alright. So, I finished (by finished, I mean closed out of) this game. To be honest, it's not entirely good or bad. It's pretty obvious (unless this is some sort of joke game) that this is a first attempt at RPG Maker, so I'll try to keep that in mind when I list my pros/cons below.

Pros/Cons: Really Work on This!
+ Not too bad of a job with the mapping. At least the tile-sets are used correctly! That's always a plus in my book. Unfortunately, it's the only plus...
- Poor writing. I'm not sure if English is your native language, or if you're still in school, but the writing is pretty bad. I'm not just talking about the general story (where little there is), but the actual grammar, spelling, and punctuation is all messed up. If English isn't your native language, then try finding a translator or spellchecker. It'd go a long way helping this game.
- Music... I don't think it really went where it should. I have a bad time remembering the music in most games, but the tunes in this one seemed particularly disappointing and uninteresting. :/
- Character design and effort put into their personalities doesn't even exist. It's like you put 0 effort into how or whom you wanted your characters to be or act like. This, overall, was the most disappointing thing about the entire game. The characters are just bland and boring.
- Cut-scenes... didn't really make a lot of sense. For example, Steve tells the PC that he needs her to do some chores and that he'll leave the chore list on her desk on an entirely other map. Yet, he just vanishes. It doesn't make a lot of sense. This is more than likely just a slight overlook but it's still a good example.
- Lack of a quest-log is a no-no when you give the PC a ton of quests to do right from the beginning. I think I completed 1/4 of the chores, or was it 1/5 of the chores? Either way, add in some way to keep track of those. :P

Don't consider this game entirely bad, though. It does show potential if you just work on the cons, the negative things, of this game. Like I said, it's obviously a first attempt at RPG maker, but it's probably one of the better ones. =)
author=Wyvernjack
Alright. So, I finished (by finished, I mean closed out of) this game. To be honest, it's not entirely good or bad. It's pretty obvious (unless this is some sort of joke game) that this is a first attempt at RPG Maker, so I'll try to keep that in mind when I list my pros/cons below.

Pros/Cons: Really Work on This!
+ Not too bad of a job with the mapping. At least the tile-sets are used correctly! That's always a plus in my book. Unfortunately, it's the only plus...
- Poor writing. I'm not sure if English is your native language, or if you're still in school, but the writing is pretty bad. I'm not just talking about the general story (where little there is), but the actual grammar, spelling, and punctuation is all messed up. If English isn't your native language, then try finding a translator or spellchecker. It'd go a long way helping this game.
- Music... I don't think it really went where it should. I have a bad time remembering the music in most games, but the tunes in this one seemed particularly disappointing and uninteresting. :/
- Character design and effort put into their personalities doesn't even exist. It's like you put 0 effort into how or whom you wanted your characters to be or act like. This, overall, was the most disappointing thing about the entire game. The characters are just bland and boring.
- Cut-scenes... didn't really make a lot of sense. For example, Steve tells the PC that he needs her to do some chores and that he'll leave the chore list on her desk on an entirely other map. Yet, he just vanishes. It doesn't make a lot of sense. This is more than likely just a slight overlook but it's still a good example.
- Lack of a quest-log is a no-no when you give the PC a ton of quests to do right from the beginning. I think I completed 1/4 of the chores, or was it 1/5 of the chores? Either way, add in some way to keep track of those. :P

Don't consider this game entirely bad, though. It does show potential if you just work on the cons, the negative things, of this game. Like I said, it's obviously a first attempt at RPG maker, but it's probably one of the better ones. =)


;~; It is my first RPG game. Thanks for criticizing my game though, I'll do better. I didn't really plan the story-line out either, I guess that's why the characters are so bland.
Ratty524
The 524 is for 524 Stone Crabs
12637
The download link takes me to the anti-climbing paint screen. What happened?
Is this game out theres no download link?
it looks pretty cool
author=PixelGem
Is this game out theres no download link?
it looks pretty cool


Haha! It wasn't. I deleted the files, but looking back on this, I should have left it up for you guys to play.
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