Thanks for the review. I'm glad you would take your time to write this, even being negative.
Most of the critics are expected. The remake has basicly improved the beginning as you mentioned. The spelling is probrably true as well, even though i do not notice many. But being my first game, I would like to leave it at that.
I for one know it's not a classic, but years after building it, I felt that in a whole it tells a story, and is not terrible. I think it's very dificult to be completly professional, although I know it is possible.
I will leave it up for download for the ones who would play through the whole game and have a diferent idea. Although i won't promise they will have such a diferent idea from this review.
I would be pleased to see more comments even if negatives such as this one =)