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Queen Mary’s Script is a tale of a young girl who finds a happy escape in her own dreams. She lives in a shell closed off from the world and only in her own room can she express her feelings. That is, until she happens upon the doll Clause and all at once, the magic she yearned for in her life is thrust upon her.

However, she soon finds that magic isn’t always what it looks like in books and dolls are just as selfish as humans.

It features:
- An original story with 100% original, hand drawn assets.
- A classical bgm featuring the likes of Chopin and Rachmaninoff
- Falcao ABS battle system customized specifically for this game
- Plenty of character secrets and dialogue



*The original QMS was released in 2013. QMSRetold is a complete overhaul of the game in both story, graphics and everything in between! It's a brand new adventure for both new and old players!*
While not necessary to play, Ringmaster Clause is a prequel to Queen Mary's Script.
https://rpgmaker.net/games/6441/
You don't have to play it to get the full experience of QMS, but it does help provide more backstory for many characters that appear throughout the game!

Latest Blog

QMS Retold demo is released!

It took me a long, long time to finally get this out to everyone. But the QMS Retold demo is finally released!
A lot of love went into the demo and I'm very happy with how the game in general is going. I learned a lot from my nearly 4 years in the rpgmaker scene, so there's a stark difference between the original and the new version of QMS. I hope everyone enjoys it.

You can either download here or on tumblr
Please feel free to follow, critique, and share!
Thank you!
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Are there multiple endings I could try to get?
^ Yes there are 3 different endings and 1 extra scene you can get after the normal ending .
oh god ! everything looks cute :3 ! i will try it now , even though i always play horror games :P
i just start playing but i didn't understand .. why she need a help from a doll ? and help for what ? also who was screaming in the middle of the night?
author=R-Gamer
i just start playing but i didn't understand .. why she need a help from a doll ? and help for what ? also who was screaming in the middle of the night?


Hello and thank you for playing QMS!
She thought Clause would actually help her with her family member, but he ended up not doing anything.
As for who is screaming, you'll find that out later in the game :>
i have try all the 4 ending . loved this game :)
When I've played the game the music reminded me so much of Three the Hard Way. Then when Clause got summoned by the Ministry I've recognized the music from TTHW...xD

Also, is there any way Mary would forgive her classmate? (I think I've checked on the email too late...)
^ All of the music in my games are actually classical pieces :> The Ministry's music is Schubert's Moment Musicaux

On Mary's classmate::
If Mary and Masaki had some time to grow out of their dramatic teenage years and work something out together, the two could've been great friends in the end. Unfortunately, the ending separates the two for good. So I definitely could see her forgiving Masaki sometime in the future, but it just never was allowed to happen in the story.
I love this game, but sadly I am stuck and can't find the red box/door that Clause is talking about. Clause is stuck in the doll jail, and asks me to do something. I disagree and tell him I'm gonna help him. I can't find out where to go.
^ Hello! sorry you ran into trouble!
While in the doll prison area, go to the right and you'll get a prompt asking if you're ready.
Sorry it wasn't clear!
I enjoyed playing Queen Mary's Script and I'm amazed that this is your first game on RPG Maker. I loved your main characters and was sad to see the game end. With such a great adventure to start with, I'm excited to see what else you come up with.
Looking forward to play the game! I hope I actually dare to play it. XD
shayoko
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random thoughts
it was slightly annoying not knowing where to go to progress the plot at first.

what are batwings for? they don't go in your inventory.

edmund is just a major plot hole.clouse clearly stated that dolls cannot interact with
anyone besides other dolls,dollmakers and humans that they intend to forma contract with
mary is none of these things.

sometimes enemies don't die and keep moving around.
in one case they were invincible from the start but they could hurt you.

wha...so your brother is this barbaric piece of shit that you and i assume...your mom put up with for no valid reason?
and you call your brother dragon and mom queen?...

i was happy when that annoying and selfish women died!

As good as it gets was the best ending.


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i did not enjoy this. outside the live action battle system. i did not enjoy this.
author=shayoko
random thoughts
it was slightly annoying not knowing where to go to progress the plot at first.

what are batwings for? they don't go in your inventory.

edmund is just a major plot hole.clouse clearly stated that dolls cannot interact with
anyone besides other dolls,dollmakers and humans that they intend to forma contract with
mary is none of these things.

sometimes enemies don't die and keep moving around.
in one case they were invincible from the start but they could hurt you.

wha...so your brother is this barbaric piece of shit that you and i assume...your mom put up with for no valid reason?
and you call your brother dragon and mom queen?...

i was happy when that annoying and selfish women died!

As good as it gets was the best ending.

Thanks for your thoughts! Let me reply to a few things: (Also, please bear in mind this is an old game that I do not update any more. It is getting a remake in a few months so technical things are sort of no help as of right now)
- I agree that I had no idea how to express how the player should go through the plot. It's something I'm working on in the future. Sorry it ruined the experience for you.
- Batwings are for the Bat Toy weapon that you can find. It's a sidequest.
- Mary stumbled into his haven and according to doll rules, you cannot leave until you ask permission from the hosting doll or get forced out. Edmund isn't a plot hole but so much a doll that doesn't really follow the "rules" most dolls follow. He doesn't care that Mary is a girl he has no connection with and interacts with her freely because that's just who he is. Sorry if this didn't come across too well. In the new version of this game, I'm working on every character's personality so misunderstandings like this don't happen.
- The enemy thing is a bug that I've since fixed in future games and will fix for the new version.
- This is hard to respond to as it's something only people who are familiar with emotional/sibling abuse can really understand. Think about this, what CAN you do? When a sibling is that terrible, but most places do not consider sibling abuse an actual thing (it's hard enough getting an order of protection against them.) it's hard to get away from it. There's also the fact that even when you understand abuse is going on, you don't want to or know how to break away from it. When you've been conditioned to live with abuse, you make excuses (her mother), escape reality (Mary) and just live with it (the both of them). It's only when Clause comes in that Mary starts to realize she has a chance and can break away which she does. Her admitting in the Ministry what is going on is a huge pivotal moment for her because she finally says "I'm being abused by my brother" to herself out in the open. In the new game, I hope to go through and show more how Mary's family works. Her mother is an actual character that shows up and so is her brother. But I also don't want it to be the main point of the game as it's not about that. The game is about the world of dolls. I don't expect people to really look into sibling abuse after playing this game or even try to understand it, but it probably would help.


Thank you for your thoughts.
I played the game five times...yes...five...

I used print screen to save screen shots of things that weren't meant to be seen but for a moment, I took away weapons that were meant to be used against me, I searched through the games files, I'm no hacker, but I did everything else...all to save a doll!

Curse you and your emotionally effecting game!

Confound it all, I love it though!
author=ThisIsNotNoOne
I played the game five times...yes...five...

I used print screen to save screen shots of things that weren't meant to be seen but for a moment, I took away weapons that were meant to be used against me, I searched through the games files, I'm no hacker, but I did everything else...all to save a doll!

Curse you and your emotionally effecting game!

Confound it all, I love it though!

Wow thank you so much!
author=gabicho
^ All of the music in my games are actually classical pieces :> The Ministry's music is Schubert's Moment Musicaux

On Mary's classmate::
If Mary and Masaki had some time to grow out of their dramatic teenage years and work something out together, the two could've been great friends in the end. Unfortunately, the ending separates the two for good. So I definitely could see her forgiving Masaki sometime in the future, but it just never was allowed to happen in the story.
Maybe a sequel?
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