Well, I got through editing four chapters today, so here's the 2nd release!

I'm pretty happy with how it all came together, aside from a few narrative hiccups in the 12th chapter, which I hope will be forgiven (since it's only Maya talking). Now I can get right to work on chapters 13-18. Again, I want to try and bridge the gaps between releases a bit better, but we'll have to see how it goes. I'm still looking for a job, so...

Anyways, all feedback to this point is welcome and encouraged (not to mention greatly appreciated). Stay tuned for more!