Militibus Elementis Arc 1

Hi, everyone. I would like some feedback on the new version please. I am working on the the third game in t he series, the one you don't need to play the first two games to understand. However I still want some feedback on Arc 1, and 2 of this game. The reviews for this one are outdated even the starred ones. Make sure you play this one before playing Arc 2 though, or you will not understand what is going on. The reason on I want feedback on Arc 1, and 2 is because I want to know what I can do better with the third game. Please do not discourage from working on the third game though when you leave feedback.