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Feedback on Chapter 3 Wanted! :)

  • Kirroha
  • 02/03/2016 03:29 PM
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Thank you all for playing the Mica: Apoptosis Chapter 3 Package! So far, however, we haven’t received much feedback apart from “It’s good” and “It’s fun” and we’ll need to know a bit more than that so that we can cater the full version more to your preferences (as well as to answer any queries that you have pertaining the game) and make the full game more enjoyable to everyone!

So if you’ve finished Chapter 3, please do help us reblog this and answer a few simple questions so we know what you feel about the story so far. owo Thank you so much for your invaluable help!

1. What do you think of the game so far?
2. Who are generally your favourite characters, and why?
3. What are some questions you want answered the most in the full game?
4. What do you predict are answers to these questions?
5. Which characters do you find the most curious or interesting? (Can overlap with #1)
6. What do you generally think of the story so far?
7. What particular scene(s) did you like in the demo?
8. Favorite chapter and protagonist?
9. … Pairings/Ships, do you have any?
10. Was it scary?
11. What’s your favourite part to play through?
12. Take a random screenshot!

And if you have any other thoughts about gameplay and so on, feel free to post them! :)

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1.This game is really fun to play.
2.My favorite characters are Mika(Because I feel bad for her) and Lenine because he seems....Nice.
3.What happened to Mika in the past, what's going on between Mika and Princess Micaiah both having 'powers', if the goddess really exists, what Divine Punishment really is.
4.Idk, Idk, maybe, Idk
5.Mika and Micaiah
6.It's really interesting and makes me want to play more
7.The scenes with Mika and that chinese guy who's name I can't remember right now
8.Chapter 3, Mika
9.Micaiah and Lenine, Mika and that chinese guy
10.Yeah, especially the part where I couldn't turn around and had to keep going straight
11.Chapter 1
Thank you so much for the feedback! :D
author=Kirroha
Thank you so much for the feedback! :D

No problem!
1. Well, I didn't expect it to get that dark. Chapter 2 was dark, but chapter 3 was even darker. There was more horror. Overall, I find the game enjoyable!
2. My favorite character is Mika. She isn't all that goody-two-shoes and her personality is interesting.
3. What exactly are the connections between everyone in this story? Is there more to Rothwell? Just what did Princess Micaiah do? What will happen to Mika and Princess Micaiah???
4. At the start, I tried to find clues about the connections, but looks like simply looking at the appearances won't do. I really can't predict the answer to these questions!
5. Most of them are. If I were to choose, I'm curious about Princess Micaiah and I find Mika the most interesting.
6. Dark, yet interesting. It really keeps you thinking about the possibilities in the story.
7. It has to be the one with Mika and Dai! They were so cute! The game has horror elements, but the cute parts really help lighten the mood.
8. Chapter 3 and Mika
9. Mika and Dynasty, Micaiah and Lenine, possibly Lenine and Euphony if there's more to her.
10. Yes! I don't like how that girl kept following me. I couldn't turn back! Also when Lenine went out to the balcony and then that thing appeared.
11. Chapter 2 and 3. I like the puzzles. The math that had to be done in chapter 2 was fun. I felt a sense of accomplishment every time I solved a puzzle. I also like the shift of mood in chapter 2 and how Mika reacted whenever she read a part of her diary.
12.
KatanaHiroshi
I am definitely not in VTuber hell.
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Umm, don't fight please! All feedback is very welcome and I am very thankful for it! :)

@Katana: Hiya, thanks for pointing it out but the screenshot isn't a typo - "human" is being used as an adjective here, ala "You're not human". Unless there's something else I'm not seeing, in which case I'll be really grateful if you can point that out for me, thanks! :) Cheers!
KatanaHiroshi
I am definitely not in VTuber hell.
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Oh well, the sentence is pretty clunky to begin with, so I think I'll probably just swap it out and replace it with something else that means the same thing. Thanks for the advice!

In any case, I hope the secrets in the game can still surprise you, even if you think you've gotten some theories :)
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unity
You're magical to me.
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author=KatanaHiroshi
@Kirroha: Still, there's an error in the actual screenshot itself. It should be "The door's not a human" rather than "A door is not human." Seriously, you're indicating that it has a personality rather than telling that it's a subject.

Actually, "A door is not human" is also correct in this context and not actually a typo. Though it is a little clunky, yes.

No need to fight here, you two. Katana, please be less rude, and Hikano, you don't have to drag Katana's own game into this. This should be about this game.
@Katana, Hikano -- Hey guys, really sorry but I hope you can stop fighting, if not I will have to hide your posts because this is really not the place for this. Hikano, I don't think Katana intends any kind of flame, please drop it.

@unity: Oh phew, good to know I got it right then! I was kind of panicking and wondering if I've lost my ability to tell grammar for a second. I'll still swap it for something less clunky though (maybe just something along the lines of "As long as it isn't human..."), thanks for the clarification! :)
unity
You're magical to me.
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You're welcome! Yes, "As long as it isn't human..." sounds a lot better to me ^_^
KatanaHiroshi
I am definitely not in VTuber hell.
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unity
You're magical to me.
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author=KatanaHiroshi
@unity: It's not actually a typo... or is it? Oh wait, I actually did this before I went to bed. Heh, bad days make you really bad at stuff, right? Still, it could be "cell door" 'cause... you know, people?


I have seen you misuse the English language in several of your statuses and in various posts, not to mention that last post itself. You may want to actually be sure when you accuse someone of making a typo if you make constant typos yourself. It's very obnoxious, otherwise.
Might be a bit late but I loved the game so...
1.Loving the story and how everything relates
2.Mika because she was helpless when 'bad things' happened to her and her village and it will have effected her more as a child than Micaiah as she was more mature. I also like Fleur and Rainer because of their personality and how this will affect them later on, scarring them deeper.
3.How does the boy think of Mika now after finding out about her? Will he be scared or not trust her later on?
4.Probably stay with her because he thinks she has changed, though i like the idea of having to gain his trust again by chasing him but stopping a thing get him.
5.I'm wondering more about Micaiah after Mika's story was explained
6.It's great how dark things have become, this is a massive step up from the previous chapters as more is explained. I also like how the horror aspect fits in so well.
7. The scene where you get chased down the stairs and can't look at the woman, I died so many times until I realised you need to burn the book, I kept trying to go around it. But the creep factor was definetely there.
8.Chapter 3, Mika
9.Not really
10.Yes. I was so scared when you had to go straight down and avoid looking.
11.The flashbacks but if you want the gamemplay ,again, the Chase scene lol.
12. (I was gonna put up a screenshot of the creepy face that pops up if you try go go left or right in the last scene of chapter 3 but it didn't work so... whoops)
@KatanaHiroshi AND Hikano-Ayami - Yeah, quit it. You were both asked to stop multiple times by the page owner and if you start it up again I will issue warnings for being disruptive and going off-topic. Assuming you're old enough to be on the site, you should be well old enough to know how not to act like little children. :/

@Kirroha: Next time someone does something like that, PM me and I'll issue warnings. You also have the ability, as owner of the gamepage, to hide posts (I did that for you in this case, hope you don't mind). Make use of that feature when idiots act out and just remember that the report button is there for this kind of thing too. Keeping peace is one of our jobs as mods, so don't worry too much about making use of it.

Also, as someone who has studied English, the sentence is technically fine (bar it being a little clunky and the overuse of ellipses). The main issue is with the subject matter. It would be better to say something like 'The door is not made of hardwood' or 'The door seems to be light enough that a solid blow could knock it down' or something that actually makes sense in context for the door to be. Not being human doesn't make much sense because it makes you assume that she spends her time banging down humans or something. I mean, okay, if that is actually a thing she does regularly in the game it might make some sort of sense for her to compare the two, but otherwise it comes off as a weird connection between two very different substances.
unity
You're magical to me.
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author=Liberty
Also, as someone who has studied English, the sentence is technically fine (bar it being a little clunky and the overuse of ellipses). The main issue is with the subject matter. It would be better to say something like 'The door is not made of hardwood' or 'The door seems to be light enough that a solid blow could knock it down' or something that actually makes sense in context for the door to be. Not being human doesn't make much sense because it makes you assume that she spends her time banging down humans or something. I mean, okay, if that is actually a thing she does regularly in the game it might make some sort of sense for her to compare the two, but otherwise it comes off as a weird connection between two very different substances.


From the game's description:
You have the power to split the world into half. You can destroy buildings, overturn mountains…
But you are still powerless against a human.
1. It's amazing.
2. Micaiah. Because, well i just like her personality.
3, Is the goddess and Micaiah are related?
4. Maybe. Cuz, their face somehow look alike.
5. Lenine and Rothwell..
6. It's the best and i'm really waiting for the next chapter.
7. The flashback of Mica past stories.
8. chapter 1. Mica
9. Micaiah and Lenine, Mica and Dynasty.
10. You know the answer.
11. Almost all the parts. Except, the parts where Lenine chased by the Axe Girl
12.
1. What do you think of the game so far?
I'm thoroughly enjoying it, has a lot of in-depth storyline for the protagonists and some of their unfortunate encounters in game.

2. Who are generally your favourite characters, and why?
Lenine and Euphony, they're both playful characters when they speak together.

3. What are some questions you want answered the most in the full game?
Can the divine punishment's curse be broken?
Will peace be restored when the "Things" are no longer existence (if it comes to that)?


4. What do you predict are answers to these questions?
Further research and interrogation into the Cardinal and the other alchemists involved.
Further chapters into the red books that reveals more about the story of the goddess, devil etc.


5. Which characters do you find the most curious or interesting? (Can overlap with #1)
Curious about the cloaked boy, thought at first he was Rothwell due to size, facial expression etc.
Found Dynasty's backstory interesting, involvement with the church he came from and the madam pursuing him was very good!


6. What do you generally think of the story so far?
Has a lot of great points to it, the story I believe heavily involves around Himeya Mika as she's the one who relates most to the plot of the story from the very beginning. I feel Lenine and Micaiah's perspectives are nearly the same as both take in the same place.

7. What particular scene(s) did you like in the demo?
In Chapter 0, I liked the encounter with the Cardinal and their sudden urge to enact violence, mostly though when Mika plunged the glass blade to save Rothwell.

8. Favorite chapter and protagonist?
Himeya Mika and her chapters were my favorites.

9. … Pairings/Ships, do you have any?
Two pairs, Micaiah & Lenine, and Mika & Dai.

10. Was it scary?
Not particularly scary, although the red sky did give me a "what's going to happen next?" feeling. Was more puzzle solving scary than actually scary (especially the first puzzle involving the Messiah).

11. What’s your favourite part to play through?
The neck snapping event of the madam near the end of Chapter 3, her treachery thoroughly deserved the cold mercy of death.
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