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Does this look okay as the title screen for a gothic-ish horror RPG game?
  • Kirroha
  • Added: 04/13/2014 02:43 PM
  • Last updated: 03/28/2024 09:21 PM
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I feel like it could work with the title in there. Looks good to me~
Marrend
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I kinda like these expressions. The guy is all "I'm attached with the Red String of Fate to this girl?" whereas the girl is all "I like this guy and I'm attached to him with the Red String of Fate? I'm so embarrassed!"

But that's just me.

*Edit: I thought the Red String of Fate was actually a thing!
Hahaha, that sounds pretty interesting, but isn't really the effect I'm trying to get at, so thanks for telling me. I've tried altering the guy's expression. Does it still give off that feel?
Marrend
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To be honest? Yes, it does.
Hmm, thanks. I'll see what I can do, but it'll probably be very limited lol since it's a gift art piece.
It's not bad as it is, but maybe something a bit more "conceptual" would be more fitting for a horror game. For example, rather than showing the character's full-portraits, how about just showing their silhouettes? Or maybe just two hands united by the string, idk...

Another thing. The word "apoptosis" is a bit difficult to read. Why does it have to have a different font and size than the word "Mica"?
I thought about going for something more conceptual at first, but scrapped the idea because I wanted a more shiny and less gritty title screen. The theme of the story is about grittiness beneath the pretty, after all (which also explains the sudden shift in the logo). :)

Thanks for the advice! I really appreciate it :D
I like this! The most wonderful thing about it is the rose. It's wonderful.

I would suggest that you change "apoptosis" font to a gothic one, that is the theme you want. It's font now reminds greek or coloseum fight like stuff. I would also take away the scratch.
LockeZ
I'd really like to get rid of LockeZ. His play style is way too unpredictable. He's always like this too. If he ran a country, he'd just kill and imprison people at random until crime stopped.
5958
Yeah, unless you change their faces to abject horror, I'm not going to look at this and imagine it to be anything other than a dating sim.
I'll see if I can redo it then. :) Thanks for the reviews!
shayoko
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