• Add Review
  • Subscribe
  • Nominate
  • Submit Media
  • RSS
The year is 1815...
The world has fallen into darkness. All that was once peaceful in the world of Galem, had become complete chaos... No one was prepared for the darkness, and one by one, the villagers, warriors, and the children fell. However... One group had a plan... a last hope...



The project is my first true attempt to create a fantasy adventure game... So I know next to nothing and have no experience or skill... But Im trying to learn. All the text and stuff may change in the final version as i have revised the beginning and such on multiple occasions. However if you like the demo let me know!!!!

Latest Blog

Progress

Blog on progress being made. for me to update you all on how the development is going.
  • Production
  • joshharbin
  • RPG Maker VX Ace
  • Adventure
  • 06/26/2014 04:04 AM
  • 01/11/2019 04:22 PM
  • N/A
  • 16075
  • 4
  • 126

Posts

Pages: 1
how short is it? nevermind.....so....your spelling and grammar needs a lot of work. What is it with the FUCK word....you can express yourself as you wish and perhaps its natural for you to use the word every two or three sentences but for me it is tacky beyond reason. On the other hand you are certainly talented to have created what you have and perhaps it will be a good game once developed and the spelling/ grammar is fixed up.
author=Roy
how short is it? nevermind.....so....your spelling and grammar needs a lot of work. What is it with the FUCK word....you can express yourself as you wish and perhaps its natural for you to use the word every two or three sentences but for me it is tacky beyond reason. On the other hand you are certainly talented to have created what you have and perhaps it will be a good game once developed and the spelling/ grammar is fixed up.

Thanks Roy... Yeah, to be honest I don't remember the reason behind why i put fuck in there in the first place. I put it in while i was extremely tired, but naturally no, its not my word of choice. Anyways, i planned on taking it out and giving the game a more serious feel. But i am extremely greatful for your feedback!!!!!!!
This post has been hidden by the game developer. Click here to show the post anyway.
shayoko
We do not condone harassing other members by PM.
515
Darkness :3
<Removed by Moderator>
sorry but this game does not look interesting at all
id rather go play goat simulator o.o
Do NOT promote your own/others' games on someone else's game page unless asked for.
Honestly, it's quite rude.
nhubi
Liberté, égalité, fraternité
11099
Josh the first thing I do have to say, create a non-rtp version, the size of this thing will seriously cut down on the number of people who are willing to download the game to have a look at it, which will in turn reduce the number of people will to supply you with feedback.

Now you've made it very clear that this is your first game so I'm not going to go on about the use of RTP graphics and not just because actually I don't have a problem with it at all, but I will say you've obviously put a bit of thought into your mapping since they are not all bland featureless expanses, but you do suffer a little from oversymmetry. The human eye likes symmetry but in situations like ruins and forests that doesn't always happen, you may want to look at mixing it up a little in those areas to give the place a more natural feel. Don't have the skeletons falling between all the statues in the temple for example, or mix and match tree and bushes in both style and dimensions in the woods. That sort of thing.

Also I am really with Roy on his first comment, run your stuff through a spell checker before you put it into the engine. Write it all out first in a word processing programme and let it find the spelling and grammar errors for you. It'll save a lot of work later on.
Looks nice for your first game, I will give it a try
I bought this game on steam from developer garnudo games. It turned out to be just the demo version and it the same game as what you have here. Is this your game?
Pages: 1