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Exposition deletion

  • pianotm
  • 03/15/2015 02:02 AM
  • 247 views
I've re-written the school scene mostly. I've gotten rid of the exposition which I didn't like and I don't think anyone else liked it either. The flashback comes earlier in the discussion and the conversation comes afterward. It's now a Q & A between students and teacher, more like a natural classroom setting. Not as much info about overall storyline, but we do learn about Yarzul thinking and Uiyi's feelings.

I've almost finished the police station, where the first story branch is going to occur. Yarzul now disappear if you choose to escape. It was an oversight, I swear. FangStiltzkin has fixed the Pest Control sidequest. Now, Paul can take the rat tails and pay you in a lump sum. Also, FangStiltzkin is working on new battle music, and I must say, it's coming along nicely.