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Game summary:
A girl find out that she was trap in a weird house. The house give her a familiar feeling. To get out of the house she must find a key to open the main door by going through many rooms. But among those rooms there is someone else who is waiting for her and a big secret is going to be uncovered through the gameplay.

Duration: 30-45 minutes

Note: This is my first game, the game play isn't satisfied yet. Furthermore, the grammar in the game isn't 100% correct because i'm not a native English speaker. Hope the game could bring you new and fresh experiences.

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Yes you have read it right. We have been working really hard for this. This will be the theme song for the whole game and will be soon uploaded on Soundcloud( due to copyright reason, i will not upload it here). Thanks for all the support and Happy new year guys, the game is coming close :)))))
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  • Xnition
  • MaxieJ
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  • Puzzle
  • 03/27/2015 02:21 PM
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Frogge
I wanna marry ALL the boys!! And Donna is a meanc
18309
Wow this looks very good!I'll play it as soon as a download is added.
author=ExtremeDevelopment
Wow this looks very good!I'll play it as soon as a download is added.
Thanks man! By the way, i uploaded the game :))
Frogge
I wanna marry ALL the boys!! And Donna is a meanc
18309
author=Xnition
author=ExtremeDevelopment
Wow this looks very good!I'll play it as soon as a download is added.
Thanks man! By the way, i uploaded the game :))

Cool I'll play it and come back!
Frogge
I wanna marry ALL the boys!! And Donna is a meanc
18309
Already stuck...Is there a walkthrough somewhere?
I'm stuck where you exit the opening room.I checked every door and it says ''it's lock''(the last part was a joke btw).So far,I love it,especially the lighting.There are some grammar mistakes though I don't mind it.Still,you should get someone to fix the grammar errors since it may make some people turn away.
Ok i'll do my best to fix t
author=ExtremeDevelopment
Already stuck...Is there a walkthrough somewhere?
I'm stuck where you exit the opening room.I checked every door and it says ''it's lock''(the last part was a joke btw).So far,I love it,especially the lighting.There are some grammar mistakes though I don't mind it.Still,you should get someone to fix the grammar errors since it may make some people turn away.

I'll try my best to fix th grammar :) thanks for your feedback
There's a lot of grammar/spelling mistakes, judging by the location on your profile I'll guess English isn't your first language so I'll go easy on you there. However, a lot of the dialogue still feels out of place (too comedic) and the character isn't very appealing to me at all.

Also, your lighting effects appear in a very obvious, "immersion-breaking" way. If you set every transition (doors, stairs) so that it fades out before the transfer, then set an auto-run on every map with a fade-in (and erase at the end) your effects should load before anyone can see it happen.

The goal isn't very clear, either. I ran around the house for quite awhile looking for any clue of what I was supposed to be doing, until I got frustrated and just started checking every box, poster, and plant. This doesn't make for interesting gameplay; you have to make it clear to the player that they need to look for a key, then place hints as to where they should expect to find it. You could do a puzzle, or you could make the location slightly different from similar objects; for example, in the room with the phone, the cabinet with the open doors is where I would expect to find something important (like key 3).

The "monster" is very sudden, not in a jumpscare sort of way, but... it was really out of place and not scary at all. I honestly quit as soon as she gave me a game over. There needs to be more lead-up, at the very least tease her appearance a bit in a non-threatening way just to get us aquainted to her. Otherwise it's way out of nowhere, because I don't understand who she is or why she's here or why I should be afraid of her. The atmosphere in general is too relaxed. This could also be why the monster isn't scary, the game has no atmosphere to it. I'm sorry if that sounds harsh.

On a more positive note, I like the visuals. The mix of darkness with the cute, Pokemon-esque (it looks like a Pokemon tileset?) graphics is something I'm way way into. The screenshots were honestly the selling point for me; as I tend to ignore a lot of games I see on here, that's pretty impressive. It gave the impression of a really interesting game, one with more of a psychological feel than a "run from this monster because I told you to" feeling that's way overdone.

If you need some help with the grammar, I can offer my assistance. If you want help, anyway.
Hi, I would love to finish this game because it sounds like there is a lot more to the story but I keep getting stuck
at the part where I can exit out of the front door because mother catches me once I leave. I still have a locked bed room door and can't seem to find the key...hmm.
author=Riddleriddle
Hi, I would love to finish this game because it sounds like there is a lot more to the story but I keep getting stuck
at the part where I can exit out of the front door because mother catches me once I leave. I still have a locked bed room door and can't seem to find the key...hmm.

There is no key for that bedroom, you don't have to look for it
author=Xnition
author=Riddleriddle
Hi, I would love to finish this game because it sounds like there is a lot more to the story but I keep getting stuck
at the part where I can exit out of the front door because mother catches me once I leave. I still have a locked bed room door and can't seem to find the key...hmm.
There is no key for that bedroom, you don't have to look for it

is there any way to finish the game without the last game over? the one that riddlerriddle was talking about. I'm guessing that I'd need to find gasoline somewhere to power the generator, but I can't find it anywhere and there isn't really a clue to where you can find it. Searching all the rooms won't help for me, because the lady seems to be room triggered and for instance I can't exit the third room (the storage) without dieing.
author=KunaKasai
author=Xnition
author=Riddleriddle
Hi, I would love to finish this game because it sounds like there is a lot more to the story but I keep getting stuck
at the part where I can exit out of the front door because mother catches me once I leave. I still have a locked bed room door and can't seem to find the key...hmm.
There is no key for that bedroom, you don't have to look for it
is there any way to finish the game without the last game over? the one that riddlerriddle was talking about. I'm guessing that I'd need to find gasoline somewhere to power the generator, but I can't find it anywhere and there isn't really a clue to where you can find it. Searching all the rooms won't help for me, because the lady seems to be room triggered and for instance I can't exit the third room (the storage) without dieing.

there's only bad ending where you have to die. There is also no gasoline for the generator. Escaping the third room is simple, if you still couldn't figure out a way then watch the walkthrough :))
author=sutorumie
There's a lot of grammar/spelling mistakes, judging by the location on your profile I'll guess English isn't your first language so I'll go easy on you there. However, a lot of the dialogue still feels out of place (too comedic) and the character isn't very appealing to me at all.

Also, your lighting effects appear in a very obvious, "immersion-breaking" way. If you set every transition (doors, stairs) so that it fades out before the transfer, then set an auto-run on every map with a fade-in (and erase at the end) your effects should load before anyone can see it happen.

The goal isn't very clear, either. I ran around the house for quite awhile looking for any clue of what I was supposed to be doing, until I got frustrated and just started checking every box, poster, and plant. This doesn't make for interesting gameplay; you have to make it clear to the player that they need to look for a key, then place hints as to where they should expect to find it. You could do a puzzle, or you could make the location slightly different from similar objects; for example, in the room with the phone, the cabinet with the open doors is where I would expect to find something important (like key 3).

The "monster" is very sudden, not in a jumpscare sort of way, but... it was really out of place and not scary at all. I honestly quit as soon as she gave me a game over. There needs to be more lead-up, at the very least tease her appearance a bit in a non-threatening way just to get us aquainted to her. Otherwise it's way out of nowhere, because I don't understand who she is or why she's here or why I should be afraid of her. The atmosphere in general is too relaxed. This could also be why the monster isn't scary, the game has no atmosphere to it. I'm sorry if that sounds harsh.

On a more positive note, I like the visuals. The mix of darkness with the cute, Pokemon-esque (it looks like a Pokemon tileset?) graphics is something I'm way way into. The screenshots were honestly the selling point for me; as I tend to ignore a lot of games I see on here, that's pretty impressive. It gave the impression of a really interesting game, one with more of a psychological feel than a "run from this monster because I told you to" feeling that's way overdone.

If you need some help with the grammar, I can offer my assistance. If you want help, anyway.
So, Xnition, me, and one more person (he haven't make an account here) is working on the patch, fix the bugs, add and edit alot of things based on your and others' comments. The patch will be uploaded in the near future, hope you will continue to support us.
Best regard,
BL developers
I love horror game. I will tired it out and post it into my youtube channel soon. May I have your permission?

- RedRanzo
author=tyang15
I love horror game. I will tired it out and post it into my youtube channel soon. May I have your permission?

- RedRanzo

sure you can do that, but this version is incompleted so there is a few bug and grammar mistakes. If you think that it is fine then it is okay for you to record it and put it on youtube
author=Xnition
author=KunaKasai
author=Xnition
author=Riddleriddle
Hi, I would love to finish this game because it sounds like there is a lot more to the story but I keep getting stuck
at the part where I can exit out of the front door because mother catches me once I leave. I still have a locked bed room door and can't seem to find the key...hmm.
There is no key for that bedroom, you don't have to look for it
is there any way to finish the game without the last game over? the one that riddlerriddle was talking about. I'm guessing that I'd need to find gasoline somewhere to power the generator, but I can't find it anywhere and there isn't really a clue to where you can find it. Searching all the rooms won't help for me, because the lady seems to be room triggered and for instance I can't exit the third room (the storage) without dieing.
there's only bad ending where you have to die. There is also no gasoline for the generator. Escaping the third room is simple, if you still couldn't figure out a way then watch the walkthrough :))

So there's only one ending? I got
The one where she wakes up in the asylum after running out the door and gets killed by her mom
And I don't see how I could get another ending (except for the non-existent gasoline one). what I meant by not being able to leave the storage room is when I have done everything and found the front door key. After that I was running around to find gasoline, but upon exiting the storage room the thing is immediately up in my face. Anyways I recorded a let's play of it so If you don't know what I mean check that.

Anyway in case you want some tips on improving the game:
Give clues on where to find things, for instance I couldn't find the first key, only after checking EVERYTHING, and that's not something that you should have in a game in my opinion.
Definitely get someone to do a spell-check before putting it up. Not only did I get slightly annoyed by grammar mistakes (which are somewhat excusable as you're not a native speaker) but there were some spelling mistakes that could've been avoided by just rechecking, like the storage room being named strorage.
I suggest rewriting the background story of the main character. Right now, to me she just comes across as a major brat and I don't feel sorry for her whatsoever. Anything could be better, like it were actually shapeshifters or demons or whatever, just use imagination.
Anyway I corrected some of the grammar as I played the game so if you want to see, my Youtube channel is the same as my username here.
author=KunaKasai
author=Xnition
author=KunaKasai
author=Xnition
author=Riddleriddle
Hi, I would love to finish this game because it sounds like there is a lot more to the story but I keep getting stuck
at the part where I can exit out of the front door because mother catches me once I leave. I still have a locked bed room door and can't seem to find the key...hmm.
There is no key for that bedroom, you don't have to look for it
is there any way to finish the game without the last game over? the one that riddlerriddle was talking about. I'm guessing that I'd need to find gasoline somewhere to power the generator, but I can't find it anywhere and there isn't really a clue to where you can find it. Searching all the rooms won't help for me, because the lady seems to be room triggered and for instance I can't exit the third room (the storage) without dieing.
there's only bad ending where you have to die. There is also no gasoline for the generator. Escaping the third room is simple, if you still couldn't figure out a way then watch the walkthrough :))
So there's only one ending? I got
The one where she wakes up in the asylum after running out the door and gets killed by her mom
And I don't see how I could get another ending (except for the non-existent gasoline one). what I meant by not being able to leave the storage room is when I have done everything and found the front door key. After that I was running around to find gasoline, but upon exiting the storage room the thing is immediately up in my face. Anyways I recorded a let's play of it so If you don't know what I mean check that.

Anyway in case you want some tips on improving the game:
Give clues on where to find things, for instance I couldn't find the first key, only after checking EVERYTHING, and that's not something that you should have in a game in my opinion.
Definitely get someone to do a spell-check before putting it up. Not only did I get slightly annoyed by grammar mistakes (which are somewhat excusable as you're not a native speaker) but there were some spelling mistakes that could've been avoided by just rechecking, like the storage room being named strorage.
I suggest rewriting the background story of the main character. Right now, to me she just comes across as a major brat and I don't feel sorry for her whatsoever. Anything could be better, like it were actually shapeshifters or demons or whatever, just use imagination.
Anyway I corrected some of the grammar as I played the game so if you want to see, my Youtube channel is the same as my username here.

thank you for your feedback, i will try to improve it in the next update :)
This game is good but it needs to add alot of things. I agree with most of the points people listed already on this page. Good luck on correcting the mistakes :)
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