... Is this 1 month old, and no one's commented?
... The first thing I get when I see this, is "BLOOD".
Is there anyone to save? Presuming that the people to be saved are the source of the blood, that's a lot of bodies. A lot.
And all that blood is fresh or something, given how red it is?
... And Trill isn't used to the language spoken by the humans... ... And she's speaking as well... Very interesting. VERY.
Also is a ThirdPersonPerson. Which is cool.