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  • Added: 04/17/2019 10:02 PM
  • Last updated: 03/28/2024 03:33 PM
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Beautiful screenshot, especially love the portrait. I don't know if the comma after "alive" is necessary.
I imagine the comma after 'alive' is there to indicate a short pause. I would do it with ellipses and the 2k3 Message's own delays, but ellipses seem to be unpopular these days.

Aiden's looking pretty boss though. Like, not mini-boss, but actual boss boss.
Wonderful pixel art, like always!

author=Dyhalto
Aiden's looking pretty boss though. Like, not mini-boss, but actual boss boss.


Yeah! I agree with that. He's cool!
CashmereCat
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narcodis is right, the comma after alive is incorrect grammar.

@Dyhalto putting an ellipsis for a short pause there would be grammatically correct, but putting a comma would not.

In other news, that portrait looks gorgeous and that message windowskin looks awesome. Love the font, too. Good job, Blind.
I'd probably rework it to read:
"However, from the stories I've heard, the fact that you were kept alive is very... unusual."


I do like the font tho. Lookin good.
Thanks everyone!

Kaempfer actually created the font and generously shared it with us. Credit to him! We all collectively wanted something cleaner and legible, and I think this does the trick.

The dialogue hasn't been rewritten yet - so there are bound to be some errors. I'll get that fixed up. :D
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