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Not so interesting review, but oh well

BEWARE, THE REVIEW CONTAINS SOME MINOR SPOILERS

Background
Uuh... I didn’t really remember, but probably I found the summary of the game on my facebook’ home around March. And I’m sooo glad that I didn’t have to wait too long before the game’ completed. Since you have such a cute and nice artwork, so why not?

Graphics & Artwork : 4.5/5
The map’s so cute and nice (I love all the doll’ room, especially the blue one), not to mention the spirites are adorable! I love how the character’ expression changed based on the dialogue. And the CGs are awesome! Suggestion from me is, you better make the dungeon much darker than that so it much scarier and the flashlight completely used! And, why you don’t put the dead end’ CG on the album? They’re awesome! (I love the one CG of the 9th Dead End!).

And can you guess my favorite CG? Yep, the one with Richard nd Charlotte with red thread on their pinky finger.

Background Music & Effects (Audio) : 3/5
I won’t complain about the lack of BGM because it’s necessary to make the players not being lulled by it and keeping the tensed atmosphere up. As for the sounds effects they’re good and tidily in place. However, I think it’ll be better if you add some footsteps effects on the game, to add more horror elements on it!

Story, Plot, & Character : 4.5/5
Okaay... so the other great things about this game is its plot!! I love how you make us thought like some bad things happens in the mansion, fearing that the blood-sucker owner would pop out in any second and drunk Amelia’ blood, and devilish butler with some mysterious air around him. But when I come to the conclusion, it was really surprised me out how the things are actually... vegetative? (idk what’s the suitable word for this it LOL, orz) It ends nicely, sweetly, and make me smile all the way as I read the reasons and the truth about all the things happened.

All the character are lovely—sweet and innocent Amelia, pushy and caring Charlotte, gentle and helpful John, and kind but timid Richard. They are naturally believeable and not annoying at all! And I couldn’t help but shipping JohnAme and RiCharlotte. (sorry, again my otome filter just automatically fully turned on along the end of the game and in Bonus room)

I love how you make every possibility of game over as the “Dead End” and make some CGs for each of them. But, the game is lack the complexity to achieve the true end. It’ll be much better if players (in this case, Amelia) should go through some additional puzzles, or collecting some hidden item to achieve the true end. And also, the Bad End could have been much... worse than that, because it didn’t give us the urge to achieve a better ending. And I give you that 0.5 point because I can see two possible ships here! (sorry, it’s just me and my otome-filter orz)

Playthrough : 3.5/5
The movement of the character was in good pace—it was simply nice. About the puzzle, I think it’s simply good cause I'm already stuck in the earlier phase of the game. But the things is, other than the time-limited puzzles, I didn’t find the other puzzles are challenging. Even so, I love how most of the puzzles are tied with each other! I also like how you put some random jumpscares in almost every corner of the mansion, so the players remember that this isn’t a mere cute halloween-themed RPG. I also love you made us Bonus room to preview some CGs and idly chatting with the other characters.

Summary
This is really great, nice, heartwarming game. At first, I suspected some gore-ending but what you gave me are two ships that never make my mind rest (since my drawing’s suck, can I make a fanfict of JohnAme and RiCharlotte?). Even though it’s out-of-season I’m glad I didn’t have wait too long until Halloween to play this game! And....

THIS GAME DESERVES MORE LOVE!!!

Over All Scores : 3,875 (let’s round it up to 4!)

Remembering it's the first game that the creator has ever made, it was totally awesome! I really looking forward for the next game! Thank you for making such a sweet game like this!
p.s. : I hope you can make some doodle of JohnAme cause why not *please ignore this haha, forgive me but I can't control my shipping mode XD

-regards, Fumaira

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Why don't you ship JohnRicha too? It will be amazing!
Thank you so much! I didn't expect to have another 4 star review omg...
The compliments on art and story are really encouraging, thank you, because that's what I was (am) trying very hard to do. And to be honest, I love mapping so much lol.

I didn't include the death CGs because I'm suggesting that it's ok not to collect them all, so that players don't have to kill Amelia for too many times if they don't want to. And imagine poor Amelia seeing the death CGs in the Extra...lol. Also partly because the CGs are rough, and I'm too shy to make them an album.

I also wanted footstep SE but the script didn't work well when dashing, so I had to give up. Sorry about that.

About the complexity...indeed, I have to say this is a very easy and simple game, for I kind of wanted to start from a small project, which is easier working on my own. I actually had no confidence throughout the development (tho I enjoyed the doodles). It surprised me that most of the players liked this little game.

Hmm...maybe I should ask, what do you guys think if I consider submit it to steam greenlight? I'm considering greenlight for the future games anyway, so...maybe I could, if I get any attention or support. (It'll remain a free game of course).

It'll be totally cool to make fanworks. I'm really flattered_(:з」∠)_
Both RiCharl and CharAme are canon, I have to say, so please just ship whatever you want (Even I can't decide, so you have two True Ends):p
And It's welcome to ask/talk to me about the stories or characters. It can be fun and inspiring, and encouraging.

I'd love to draw more about JohnAme and the others...Have something from a while ago! it's very rough but hope you like :)
author=poopoose
Why don't you ship JohnRicha too? It will be amazing!

Noope... because I'm not into those things, sorry ^ ^; (and I didn't notice some spark between them, not like CharAme tbh)


author=RaBooks
Thank you so much! I didn't expect to have another 4 star review omg...
The compliments on art and story are really encouraging, thank you, because that's what I was (am) trying very hard to do. And to be honest, I love mapping so much lol.

I didn't include the death CGs because I'm suggesting that it's ok not to collect them all, so that players don't have to kill Amelia for too many times if they don't want to. And imagine poor Amelia seeing the death CGs in the Extra...lol. Also partly because the CGs are rough, and I'm too shy to make them an album.

I also wanted footstep SE but the script didn't work well when dashing, so I had to give up. Sorry about that.

About the complexity...indeed, I have to say this is a very easy and simple game, for I kind of wanted to start from a small project, which is easier working on my own. I actually had no confidence throughout the development (tho I enjoyed the doodles). It surprised me that most of the players liked this little game.

Hmm...maybe I should ask, what do you guys think if I consider submit it to steam greenlight? I'm considering greenlight for the future games anyway, so...maybe I could, if I get any attention or support. (It'll remain a free game of course).

It'll be totally cool to make fanworks. I'm really flattered_(:з」∠)_
Both RiCharl and CharAme are canon, I have to say, so please just ship whatever you want (Even I can't decide, so you have two True Ends):p
And It's welcome to ask/talk to me about the stories or characters. It can be fun and inspiring, and encouraging.

I'd love to draw more about JohnAme and the others...Have something from a while ago! it's very rough but hope you like :)

No, no, you deserve at least 4 I think, with such CGs and story!

Haha... you're too kind for RPG horror developerer to spare our feelings not to kill Amelia too many times and collect the bad memories on the bonus room LOL XD

About the footsteps SE yeah... one of my friend (who made Nightmare of The Snow) find it hard to found the good script. Howeve, I just remember that another friend of mine (Grounded RPG developer) gave me a link for good SE : https://victorenginescripts.wordpress.com/rpg-maker-vx-ace/step-sound/ (for VX ACE, though) and I think i works well with dashing mode. Maybe you can try it!

Yeah, I think you can try submitting it on Steam, that way you will get more attention! But I'm expecting more complex and longer story, more CGs, and more everything for the next greenlit game! (and it's really kind of you to make another game for free XD). A suggestion though, if you want to be greenlit quickly, you should put some intriguing summary along with some CGs ( I know you 'd make it! So here I am, cheering for you!)

I'm all into RiCharl since I'm not into those things ^ ^ (that's why I chose Charlotte to go downstair in second run, cause I can see my two shipsso clearly); Allight, once my end term test over I'll maybe spamming one fanfic to you hahaha, and...

OMG ajdhjkahdjhajdhjahdjadhafjkajlafkfljafl THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE PICTURE RABOOK-SAMA. I'LL STALK FOLLOW YOU FOREVER!!!!
No, no, you deserve at least 4 I think, with such CGs and story!

Haha... you're too kind for RPG horror developerer to spare our feelings not to kill Amelia too many times and collect the bad memories on the bonus room LOL XD

About the footsteps SE yeah... one of my friend (who made Nightmare of The Snow) find it hard to found the good script. Howeve, I just remember that another friend of mine (Grounded RPG developer) gave me a link for good SE : https://victorenginescripts.wordpress.com/rpg-maker-vx-ace/step-sound/ (for VX ACE, though) and I think i works well with dashing mode. Maybe you can try it!

Yeah, I think you can try submitting it on Steam, that way you will get more attention! But I'm expecting more complex and longer story, more CGs, and more everything for the next greenlit game! (and it's really kind of you to make another game for free XD). A suggestion though, if you want to be greenlit quickly, you should put some intriguing summary along with some CGs ( I know you 'd make it! So here I am, cheering for you!)

I'm all into RiCharl since I'm not into those things ^ ^ (that's why I chose Charlotte to go downstair in second run, cause I can see my two shipsso clearly); Allight, once my end term test over I'll maybe spamming one fanfic to you hahaha, and...

OMG ajdhjkahdjhajdhjahdjadhafjkajlafkfljafl THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE PICTURE RABOOK-SAMA. I'LL STALK FOLLOW YOU FOREVER!!!!


Thank you so much I'll definitely try the script later!
I followed Nightmare of The Snow on Tumblr, too! It's really impressive, just a bit difficult for me QwQ

And it's now Greenlight:
http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=686535834
The RM hate is really harsh on Steam I'm gonna need all the support I can get! ;w;

Surely the next project will be more formal, with a longer gameplay, more characters and more original art. That's why we're considering Greenlight in the future (and would like to submite T&T to have a try), though we haven't decided if it's free or not. Everything should be settled after a demo, which may need a few months.

It's very pleasant and encouraging meeting you guys. I appropriate everything >w<
Thank you so much I'll definitely try the script later!
I followed Nightmare of The Snow on Tumblr, too! It's really impressive, just a bit difficult for me QwQ

And it's now Greenlight:
http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=686535834
The RM hate is really harsh on Steam I'm gonna need all the support I can get! ;w;

Surely the next project will be more formal, with a longer gameplay, more characters and more original art. That's why we're considering Greenlight in the future (and would like to submite T&T to have a try), though we haven't decided if it's free or not. Everything should be settled after a demo, which may need a few months.

It's very pleasant and encouraging meeting you guys. I appropriate everything >w<

Hahaha... NoTS could be depressing, I know. But the story is great

Yup, I had come to your steam page and following it! (and have seen the comments, too... yeah, RPGMaker was hardly accepted there. But hey, I give you a good RPG horror that success in Steam : please check Enigma An Illusion Named Family--although it's commercial hahaha...)

good luck with the greenlight and the next project XD
author=MizumoriFumaira
Hahaha... NoTS could be depressing, I know. But the story is great

Yup, I had come to your steam page and following it! (and have seen the comments, too... yeah, RPGMaker was hardly accepted there. But hey, I give you a good RPG horror that success in Steam : please check Enigma An Illusion Named Family--although it's commercial hahaha...)

good luck with the greenlight and the next project XD
Still rough.

the doodle post 0_0
Dragnfly
Beta testers!? No, this game needs a goddamn exorcist!
1786
Pumpkin is so serene
author=RaBooks
author=MizumoriFumaira
Hahaha... NoTS could be depressing, I know. But the story is great

Yup, I had come to your steam page and following it! (and have seen the comments, too... yeah, RPGMaker was hardly accepted there. But hey, I give you a good RPG horror that success in Steam : please check Enigma An Illusion Named Family--although it's commercial hahaha...)

good luck with the greenlight and the next project XD
Still rough.

the doodle post 0_0
WHAT A CUTE SKETCHES OMG... > < (despite your current mood, my condolences for your 'meeting' with such kind of people. rest assured, you still have us on your back, cheering on you \^o^/)
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