Ayda

I was honestly breathless after playing this! The bulk of my commentary is within my Let's Play and I don't want to share spoilers here (if you're a player, just play it - it's only short!), so I'll keep this quick.

Raikuden, the only ways you could improve are I think ways you're already aware of - the The End screens being a bit sudden and the Keep Hopeful ending being under-developed, but besides that it really was perfect in my experience; everything leading graciously and traumatically to that one crucial moment - a pretty accurate representation of the character's own horrific experiences and life. Just beautiful. I hope you're proud of this creation and I heartily encourage that you make more :)