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I almost forget I was making a game

Nothing kills my momentum like writing. I was making good progress filling in content and actually completing dungeons, but then I had to write a dreaded main story scene.

I'm at this awkward point as a writer where I know what I have doesn't work but don't know how to write it better. And the scene I was writing had to be good. It's the critical transition between the first and second half of the story.

Now most of the game scenes are random, one-off nonsense which is fine to write, but there is an actual story woven through there, and when I have to tell that, I freeze. Combine that with my best lines coming to me at random times (like brushing teeth), then I put off writing for the next day, hoping that the dialog will just come to me. But it doesn't. So I put it off for the next day. And then I don't touch the game for 3 months.

But I'm back, and work is actually happening. I sat down and rewrote the outline for the second half. Then I filled in each scene line by line. It's there. It's done.

My momentum is back, and I'm hoping to keep it. There's only a few dungeons left and would love to finish this game.

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Yay! You can do it!
Isrieri
"My father told me this would happen."
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This is very random post comin' at you live!

Pretty serendipitous that you made this blog post while I'm coming here to write a review of a game with writing I liked. Anyway...

Do you have a script or something? An idea of what the story you want to tell is? I could help you workshop it if you PM me. Got nothing else to do for the next four hours. Even having someone to proofread helps.


But if not:
author=Liberty
Yay! You can do it!
Thanks for the support :)

Script is a generous word for what I have, but I do have enough notes to finish the story. I feel like I'm learning too late the value of a formally written scrip that could be shared and proofread. Maybe I should organize what I have better.
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