author=Dragnfly
I guess there are lots of Italian RM developers. Cool.

I played it. The English isn't great but at least I could understand what you were meaning. There's a non-English mistake when talking to the girls after making your first decision, where she has a "1" at the end of "walk". It's also funny how you can just walk right by them without talking to them LOL. It's funny to imagine that happening.

Make_it_MagiK already mentioned the tinting issue.

There's another issue after you go through the locked door. If you try to open the menu, the game locks up.

One English problem I need to mention- the man says "Don't steal nothing from my house!" This is called a double negative, where two negatives make it positive. So he's really saying "Do steal something from my house!", which is the opposite of what he means. It should be "Don't steal anything from my house!"

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For something funny, you can go back into the house after evading the man in the garden, go back through the kitchen again and he'll be back at his starting point in the garden, where the chase resumes. That man isn't very smart:)

The mapping has some problems, especially with the shadows and edges. Never trust RPG Maker's auto shadows. They aren't reliable.

It's an interesting game and the characters look nice. I think this is the first time I've seen a child character wearing black lipstick.

But the game certainly needs more polish. I suggest playing some other RM games and seeing what they do to get an idea of how to map better. I also recommend making a post on the forums to ask if somebody can look over your text to improve the English. Nobody should be mad about the bad English but since you decided to release the game in English you should also see if somebody can help you improve it.

Keep at it.

author=Dragnfly
Oh? I just figured that because she's always hugging her panda toy. Sorry.

author=Liberty
I started an LP of the game but ran into a lot of bugs that made it a chore to beat, so I stopped until a more stable version is made. I'll post the LP up in the media section when it's uploaded, and you'll be able to see the issues there.

I think the game has promise, but it does need someone to check over the English writing for mistakes, and it also needs a fair bit of bug fixing. I'd love to see you make fully custom tiles for it, too - your style is cute and it'd be nice to see what you do when it comes to that. There's a fair few mapping errors here and there, as well, and some clean up is needed for some of the tiles (bits of lines hanging around, showing up on walls and the like).

Keep at it! >.<)b

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I stopped playing at the part where I was supposed to give the key to red girl. I said no to her and got a game over, then had to replay about 5 minutes or so (which was annoying, having insta-deaths aren't really good, especially when they're unexplained. Just BOOM DEAD doesn't really do much for a game.)

After I got up to the part where you're supposed to grab the key, I ignored it and checked the door down instead (thinking I could go back and grab it), and got locked out of the room. I stopped playing at that point, but talked a bit about the game instead.

When you fix the bugs, I'll give it another go.

author=Dragnfly
It's probably that you've used characters in the title that his system can't accommodate. It's always a good idea to have the production copy of your sounds, videos and images have very basic names.