author=Dragnfly
I guess there are lots of Italian RM developers. Cool.

I played it. The English isn't great but at least I could understand what you were meaning. There's a non-English mistake when talking to the girls after making your first decision, where she has a "1" at the end of "walk". It's also funny how you can just walk right by them without talking to them LOL. It's funny to imagine that happening.

Make_it_MagiK already mentioned the tinting issue.

There's another issue after you go through the locked door. If you try to open the menu, the game locks up.

One English problem I need to mention- the man says "Don't steal nothing from my house!" This is called a double negative, where two negatives make it positive. So he's really saying "Do steal something from my house!", which is the opposite of what he means. It should be "Don't steal anything from my house!"

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For something funny, you can go back into the house after evading the man in the garden, go back through the kitchen again and he'll be back at his starting point in the garden, where the chase resumes. That man isn't very smart:)

The mapping has some problems, especially with the shadows and edges. Never trust RPG Maker's auto shadows. They aren't reliable.

It's an interesting game and the characters look nice. I think this is the first time I've seen a child character wearing black lipstick.

But the game certainly needs more polish. I suggest playing some other RM games and seeing what they do to get an idea of how to map better. I also recommend making a post on the forums to ask if somebody can look over your text to improve the English. Nobody should be mad about the bad English but since you decided to release the game in English you should also see if somebody can help you improve it.

Keep at it.