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"Would you like it, if you were born into a criminal family?"

When you aren't born in a normal family things are harder, like in Jack's case.
Jack, who's nickname is Jackie, is 17 years old, he was born and grew up in a criminal sicilian family. His life isn't one of the best, that's why sometimes he dreams to have a normal family where all is ordinary and boring. He lives with his father and his big brother Johnny.
One day something dreadful happens, something that maybe will create a new "better" life for Jack.

For the Winterruption event!
(Hope I will finish in time...)

THIS WAS JUST A QUICK GAME MADE FOR THE WINTERRUPTION EVENT, I DIDN'T EVEN TEST IT BECAUSE IT WAS TOO LATE. SO, THERE ARE MANY ISSUES, DESPITE THIS I WILL NOT UPDATE A NEW VERSION, FOR THE SIMPLE REASON THAT IT'S NOT A SERIOUS PROJECT, I JUST DID SOMETHING RANDOM FOR THE EVENT. HOPE YOU WILL ENJOY IT ANYWAY :)

PS: IF YOU WANT TO PLAY IT AND BE SURE NOT TO RESTART THE WHOLE GAME EVERY TIME THERE WILL BE A BUG, JUST SAVE CONSTANTLY!!

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There were some mistakes(I guess): The characters' lines are missing, after I killed the cow I couldn't move, hope you'll fix it :))
author=KitoruK1
The characters' lines are missing, hope you'll fix it :))


You mean here on the page?
author=NoBody13
author=KitoruK1
The characters' lines are missing, hope you'll fix it :))
You mean here on the page?

No, in the game, Johnny's lines are too big, some parts are missing, maybe Jack's and Sonny's lines as well.
author=KitoruK1
author=NoBody13
author=KitoruK1
The characters' lines are missing, hope you'll fix it :))
You mean here on the page?
No, in the game, Johnny's lines are too big, some parts are missing, maybe Jack's and Sonny's lines as well.

Oh yeah, I know. Actually the game has many issues as I already wrote in this page, so... That's one of the many. Maybe in the future I will update a new version. And did you finish it? How was it? Leave some thoughts if you want.
PS: And for the cow, you can try to kill it in various position, so that you can move
So I have finished the game literally a minute ago. So here are some of my opinions:
_ First of is about the story, it was interesting but I couldn't do anything beside doing some minor quest. You have a great story plot but you should let the player play the main quest, let us make some choices. So that we can understand more about the story, about the emotions that Jackie has to go through.
_ Secondly, you made more spelling mistakes than grammar mistakes. But about this part, if you are not an English native speaker then it's fine.
_ Thirdly, the ending was so sad that you should make another more happy ending for Jackie and his family. Like I said, you have a great story plot, try to expand it is a good thing.
_ Then, I am curious about the man and the girl at the town gate. I thought that he would kidnnap her and Jackie would save her. (Was I wrong?)
_ Finally, great art work, the graphic was fine, you could use some art for the ending not just words.
Sooooo, those were my thoughts. Well, I was new to RPGmaker games and not a English native speaker, I could have made a few mistakes in this. I would love to see this game in a new version that has a more emotional story, more pathways and more endings. No pressure! Keep doing your best, okay? ;) <3
PS: I was heart-breaking when the game ended like that :(
So you were participating for winterruption so there were so many side quests and only one main quest?
author=KitoruK1
So you were participating for winterruption so there were so many side quests and only one main quest?

Yeah, I did that purposely. One, because I hadn't too much time and two, because the event was concerned on the sidequests.

author=KitoruK1
So I have finished the game literally a minute ago. So here are some of my opinions:
_ First of is about the story, it was interesting but I couldn't do anything beside doing some minor quest. You have a great story plot but you should let the player play the main quest, let us make some choices. So that we can understand more about the story, about the emotions that Jackie has to go through.
_ Secondly, you made more spelling mistakes than grammar mistakes. But about this part, if you are not an English native speaker then it's fine.
_ Thirdly, the ending was so sad that you should make another more happy ending for Jackie and his family. Like I said, you have a great story plot, try to expand it is a good thing.
_ Then, I am curious about the man and the girl at the town gate. I thought that he would kidnnap her and Jackie would save her. (Was I wrong?)
_ Finally, great art work, the graphic was fine, you could use some art for the ending not just words.
Sooooo, those were my thoughts. Well, I was new to RPGmaker games and not a English native speaker, I could have made a few mistakes in this. I would love to see this game in a new version that has a more emotional story, more pathways and more endings. No pressure! Keep doing your best, okay? ;) <3
PS: I was heart-breaking when the game ended like that :(

For the girl and the man, no Jackie shouldn't save her. (maybe in the future version?)

Thank you so much for the feedback! And who knows? Maybe after "if's demo" I will do an updated version without those useless sidequests ;) And for the end, well... I like sad/realistic ends. Actually I wanted to do 3 ends: Bad end, good end and true end. But as I said before, I hadn't so much time.

PS: I like your avatar, HAIKYUUUU!!
author=NoBody13
author=KitoruK1
So you were participating for winterruption so there were so many side quests and only one main quest?
Yeah, I did that purposely. One, because I hadn't too much time and two, because the event was concerned on the sidequests.

author=KitoruK1
So I have finished the game literally a minute ago. So here are some of my opinions:
_ First of is about the story, it was interesting but I couldn't do anything beside doing some minor quest. You have a great story plot but you should let the player play the main quest, let us make some choices. So that we can understand more about the story, about the emotions that Jackie has to go through.
_ Secondly, you made more spelling mistakes than grammar mistakes. But about this part, if you are not an English native speaker then it's fine.
_ Thirdly, the ending was so sad that you should make another more happy ending for Jackie and his family. Like I said, you have a great story plot, try to expand it is a good thing.
_ Then, I am curious about the man and the girl at the town gate. I thought that he would kidnnap her and Jackie would save her. (Was I wrong?)
_ Finally, great art work, the graphic was fine, you could use some art for the ending not just words.
Sooooo, those were my thoughts. Well, I was new to RPGmaker games and not a English native speaker, I could have made a few mistakes in this. I would love to see this game in a new version that has a more emotional story, more pathways and more endings. No pressure! Keep doing your best, okay? ;) <3
PS: I was heart-breaking when the game ended like that :(


For the girl and the man, no Jackie shouldn't save her. (maybe in the future version?)

Thank you so much for the feedback! And who knows? Maybe after "if's demo" I will do an updated version without those useless sidequests ;) And for the end, well... I like sad/realistic ends. Actually I wanted to do 3 ends: Bad end, good end and true end. But as I said before, I hadn't so much time.

PS: I like your avatar, HAIKYUUUU!!

Your welcome! When the new version is updated, I want to try it! ;)
author=KitoruK1
author=NoBody13
author=KitoruK1
So you were participating for winterruption so there were so many side quests and only one main quest?
Yeah, I did that purposely. One, because I hadn't too much time and two, because the event was concerned on the sidequests.

author=KitoruK1
So I have finished the game literally a minute ago. So here are some of my opinions:
_ First of is about the story, it was interesting but I couldn't do anything beside doing some minor quest. You have a great story plot but you should let the player play the main quest, let us make some choices. So that we can understand more about the story, about the emotions that Jackie has to go through.
_ Secondly, you made more spelling mistakes than grammar mistakes. But about this part, if you are not an English native speaker then it's fine.
_ Thirdly, the ending was so sad that you should make another more happy ending for Jackie and his family. Like I said, you have a great story plot, try to expand it is a good thing.
_ Then, I am curious about the man and the girl at the town gate. I thought that he would kidnnap her and Jackie would save her. (Was I wrong?)
_ Finally, great art work, the graphic was fine, you could use some art for the ending not just words.
Sooooo, those were my thoughts. Well, I was new to RPGmaker games and not a English native speaker, I could have made a few mistakes in this. I would love to see this game in a new version that has a more emotional story, more pathways and more endings. No pressure! Keep doing your best, okay? ;) <3
PS: I was heart-breaking when the game ended like that :(


For the girl and the man, no Jackie shouldn't save her. (maybe in the future version?)

Thank you so much for the feedback! And who knows? Maybe after "if's demo" I will do an updated version without those useless sidequests ;) And for the end, well... I like sad/realistic ends. Actually I wanted to do 3 ends: Bad end, good end and true end. But as I said before, I hadn't so much time.

PS: I like your avatar, HAIKYUUUU!!
Your welcome! When the new version is updated, I want to try it! ;)
author=KitoruK1
author=NoBody13
author=KitoruK1
So you were participating for winterruption so there were so many side quests and only one main quest?
Yeah, I did that purposely. One, because I hadn't too much time and two, because the event was concerned on the sidequests.

author=KitoruK1
So I have finished the game literally a minute ago. So here are some of my opinions:
_ First of is about the story, it was interesting but I couldn't do anything beside doing some minor quest. You have a great story plot but you should let the player play the main quest, let us make some choices. So that we can understand more about the story, about the emotions that Jackie has to go through.
_ Secondly, you made more spelling mistakes than grammar mistakes. But about this part, if you are not an English native speaker then it's fine.
_ Thirdly, the ending was so sad that you should make another more happy ending for Jackie and his family. Like I said, you have a great story plot, try to expand it is a good thing.
_ Then, I am curious about the man and the girl at the town gate. I thought that he would kidnnap her and Jackie would save her. (Was I wrong?)
_ Finally, great art work, the graphic was fine, you could use some art for the ending not just words.
Sooooo, those were my thoughts. Well, I was new to RPGmaker games and not a English native speaker, I could have made a few mistakes in this. I would love to see this game in a new version that has a more emotional story, more pathways and more endings. No pressure! Keep doing your best, okay? ;) <3
PS: I was heart-breaking when the game ended like that :(


For the girl and the man, no Jackie shouldn't save her. (maybe in the future version?)

Thank you so much for the feedback! And who knows? Maybe after "if's demo" I will do an updated version without those useless sidequests ;) And for the end, well... I like sad/realistic ends. Actually I wanted to do 3 ends: Bad end, good end and true end. But as I said before, I hadn't so much time.

PS: I like your avatar, HAIKYUUUU!!
Your welcome! When the new version is updated, I want to try it! ;)


:)
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