Let's work on your game descriptions!

Thanks for help.

Let's work on your game descriptions!

Here is a description for my game. What could be wrong with it?

"Brother and sister turn on magic lamp of their grandmother and fell into strange crazy dimension. They can not die here, but every wrong action drive them into beginning of their journey. Can they find the way to their home or stay in this world forever?
This is not a real game. It is just a short interactive animation, where you can make some choices. There is only one ending. Can you find it?

Use the arrow keys to choose action. "

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